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The Newest Test 2
Topic Started: Jan 5 2007, 11:32 PM (14,652 Views)
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((Asking the right questions? Like Will Smith had to do in 'I, Robot?' Let's see...))

Valley of the End

Sayuri recognized Susumu from over two years ago, when he and Itachi had attacked during the finals of the Chunin Exams. She knew he was bad news, but her knowledge of Hikaru's brother ended there.

"What do you want with Hikaru-kun?" She asked, standing in front of where Hikaru la knocked out.

The useless medics coughed up water behind the trees where they'd been washed away.

"Should we go back?" One ask another.

"No way, dumbass!" Another answered. "You saw that guy; we'd get eaten alive!"

"Then what DO we do?"

"Assume the fetal position and stay out of the way!"

With little hesitation, the medics did just this.
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"I came to finish what I started." Susumu simply said, not hesitating. "Now get out of the way."

He then stopped, looking at Musashi, and he smirked. "What happened to him? Nothing happened to him. This the path all of us in the Zenyoshi clan eventually go down." he laughed, "Or did he never tell you?"
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Nanami watched from where the medics were, but she did not interefere. Of course she knew who Susumu was... and she was willing to stop him. Nanami knew that her father had personally accepted Susumu into Akatsuki, and that meant he was a very dangerous individual... but if worst came to worst, Nanami had a plan.

"Hey you idiots!" She snapped at the medics. "Be on standby to heal if you have to -- or you can deal with ME." The woman with the Dragon-shaped ANBU mask and the Uchiha blood growled in a dangerous fashion.



Musashi looked at Hikaru. He did not recognize him, but that wasn't surprising. Two years ago the only thing he'd really cared about was Orochimaru. Perhaps if he had turned some attention to Akatsuki, he could have helped stop it...

"No," Musashi answered simply. "Hikaru never spoke about his clan..."
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For some reason Susumu had stopped what he was about to do and he turned towards Musashi to talk. "Let me tell you then, and afterwards you'll see why I have to kill him."

Susumu pointed at Sayuri. "Do you see her? Whats so special about her? Shes just an Uchiha. What makes her special? Those eyes. Look at your eyes, one white, the other red, what makes any clans behind those special? The eyes. Now look at me and my brother, what makes us special? The eyes."

Susumu seemed to be in deep thought and then he continued once more. "The Zenyoshi clan also has a special eye. It's our secret eye, and thats where it gets its name. The eye has some hidden powers, my brothers only highlights thing in red he wishes to see. But mine are fully evolved, and can create illusions, and manage my chakra output, not to mention it is with these eyes I am able to attack Chakra Directly."

Hikaru began to stir, he tried to get up but failed. "That," Susumu said pointing at Hikaru, "Is the Zenyoshi clan's curse. The power that comes from these eyes comes at a terrible price, much like yours. To gain your ultimate Sharingan, you have to kill your best friend. To gain ours, you must endure this. Normally like for me, the changes begin to happen slowly and gradually, if you wait for this power this beast like state never occurs. But if you force it to develop, well you can see the results."

The monolauge continued, "It's a curse. You lose your mind, your sanity, and all for power. I imagine that he did this for you two and for me. For me to get revenge, and from you two, he probaly either resented you or loved you enough to want to get stronger. But when you take the easy road theres always a cost." It was true, out of love for Sayuri, Loyalty to Musashi, and hatred for his brother, Hikaru had decided to jump the gun and try to develop his eye on his own.

Once more a paragraph break, "Now look at him, he's gained all the power he wants, able to take a ton of hits before even slowing, near unlimted Chakra, and power beyond his understanding. But he's lost his humanity, and now he is a beast. Believe you me, I hate my brother, but i'm doing him a favor. He can never return to human form, and will remain like that for the rest of his life, which I intend to end." Susumu stepped forward, ready to kill his brother.
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Outside - Konoha Path

Due to the power of the chakra being controlled by Itachi's eyes, Kenpachi bounced right off him with his attack. He tried gathering what was left of his own chakra for another rush, but there just wasn't enough left. "Damnit..." was all he could say, trying to move. "I guess I won't be able to finish this..."
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"I don't care what's happened to Hikaru-kun," Sayuri said. "Nothing on this earth has the right to deem another unworthy of living. I... won't let my own curse make me believe otherwise..."

She got ready to fight Susumu. "And I won't let you hurt Hikaru-kun... I won't lose two nakama today..."


The medics shrieked as Nanami ordered them to snap out of being useless cowards. "Y-yes ma'am!"

Outside-- Konoha Path

The combat medics arrived at the scene.

"Kenpachi, sir!" One said. These medics weren't losers like the others. "We're ready to lend you our assistance!"
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Musashi cast a glance at Hikaru. The pain he must have been in... the insanity that must have held his mind... it was a power inside him that he seemed unable to fight. Musashi looked back up at Susumu, and he flashed his goofy grin.

"Sorry... you're not killing my best friend. You say he's lost, that he can't return... and that only proves your own ignorance. If I counted the number of times I've heard 'can't' and 'impossible'..." Musashi clenched his fist. "The thing is, there's always a way. Maybe for some it is impossible... but Hikaru is strong. Stronger than you could believe. Not because of this curse, or because of his eyes, or because of his Zenyoshi blood... he's strong because of his spirit."

Musashi pointed towards his eyes. "You say that the power of Uchiha or Hyuuga comes from the eyes... that's not true. Real strength comes from your spirit, not your clan's blood. I've seen my Uncle Neji fight with skills that surpass many ninja... and I've seen his daughter, Hitomi-chan, become a greater ninja than he and she doesn't even have eyes! I've seen Itachi and Orochimaru and even Sasuke-sama place value in the power of Sharingan, but it was not because of our Sharingan that Sayuri and I were able to survive so long and defeat so many foes. Sharingan is just a tool like a sword or a jutsu... the true power of a ninja comes not from his blood or his jutsu or his weapons: but from his spirit. From his heart!"

Musashi looked at Hikaru. "You say that Hikaru is gone because he sought the easy way, and you have a point: He did choose poorly and he has to pay a price for that. However... that price is not his sanity and it is not his life! Just because you cannot see a way to come back doesn't mean Hikaru won't find one! You rely on your eyes for strength... but despite that, you can't see the truth. If anyone is strong enough to break this 'curse', it's Hikaru!"

Musashi stepped forward. "Susumu... don't do your brother any favors. Let him fight this -- because I believe in him!" His eyes flashed to Hikaru. "Hikaru! You listen to me! I know that you're in there! You don't need this power, Hikaru. You can beat this... you can overcome this monster! You were taught by Sasuke-sama, and just like him, you can overcome your demons! My father, the Kazekage, they overcame -- and so can you!"

Musashi narrowed his eyes, and returned them to Susumu. "He will overcome this... and you won't lay a hand on him: Not so long as there is a breath in my lungs or chakra in my body!"


Nanami watched in silence.

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Itachi was a freak of nature at this point. He was no longer human, and no longer bound by things like "Sanity". You see, in his blind ambition for power, he had allowed Frei to do things to him that had removed any sanity he once had. He had murdered his clan for power, and now he had murdered himself for power. As crazy as the old Itachi had been, the new one was completely lost. All that remained was a blood-thirsty man who sought to destroy everything that made him weak.

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"Easy now." a familiar voice rang out. It was Sasuke's and his team of Vegetable Ninja, "Maize, healing time. Galv and Cess, let me handle this, protect civillians. Kenpachi: Nice work, you rest now."

Sasuke had arrived, and this time there was no holding back. "Brother, It's been a while hasn't it?"
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"Sasuke..." Itachi looked to Sasuke, and his eyes had become yellow.

"Mmm... Sasuke, you won't find much of your brother left." There was a new voice... Frei Cresent was there! She had a devilish grin. "If you manage to defeat my 'pet', I'll tell you what happened to... Itachi's mind." She grinned like a fiend.

"Sasuke... I finally found it... the true power... Uchiha... Biju... Akatsuki... none of it is anything next to me!" Itachi growled. "There is no reason for you to survive this time!"
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Susumu shook his head. "You Konoha Ninja are all alike, believeing in crap like that. Allow me to show you your foolishness. He is lost. Despite the outcome of this battle, you have lost him, just as you lost that girl." Susumu said obviosuly provoking the fight. The hair on the back of his neck seem to stand up...

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"Funny, I was just about to say the same thing." Sasuke said with a smile. "Frei," Sasuke said referring to the mastermind behind this, "Get ready to tell me all you know, cause your pets about to become history."

Sasuke assumed a fighting stance...
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Sayuri put one of Hikaru's arms around her shoulder and lifted him from the ground. In a flash, she used the body flicker to appear at the othe end of the lake where she put him back down.

"Nanami, please protect Hikaru-kun..." She pleaded her cousin.

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A small smirk appeared on Kenpachi's face. "You're late, a**hole..." Kenpachi was barely able to get out, when Sasuke and co. arrived. There was something about being almost dead that made him not care about trying to suck up to one of the top ninjas of the village. Soon enough, he then fell unconsious.

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Nanami nodded. "I'll watch him, Sayuri."

The Uchiha girl cast her eyes on the unconcious Hikaru. He was injured and severly transfigured. Nanami would watch him, but she had to make sure he wouldn't pose a threat. A few quick hand signs and some of the water from the lake splashed up and froze around Hikaru.

Nanami had frozen Hikaru in a giant ball of ice. She flash froze him. He was perfectly alright and it wouldn't kill him... it was just suspended animation. Of course, if need be, he can escape. (Cojo.)


Musashi looked at Susumu. He held out his hands. "I'll fight you... and I'll win."

Konoha Path

Frei laughed once more. "Even if you kill him, Sasuke, you won't have your revenge..."


On a nearby hill, Taichi and Manako suddenly showed up. Manako blinked and started running forward, but Taichi held her back.

"Hang on... let's just watch."


"Sasuke..." Itachi growled. "I am not human... I am better than a biju..."

Itachi made quick hand signs and jumped forward. The flames Kenpachi had thrown at him were still burning on his body, but they were now being used as a shield.
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"What do you mean?" Sasuke asked, not letting down his guard.

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Susumu shook his head, "You don't get it do you? By letting him live, you guys are the monsters. Can you imagine what its like for him? For a few moments, he will be able to think clearly. All he will feel is pain. And now he has to live witht he guilt of killing that girl, and then once he losses his sanity it'll happen again."

Susumu laughed, "By letting him live and taking him back to that village of yours, you'll just allow him to suffer, he'll go on a rampage, killing others every single day. If you want him to live so badly fine, but I'm telling you its not what he would want."

Susumu lowered his hands. He wasn't even in a stance, it was as if he didn't want to fight.
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"... It's not up to me," Musashi shook his head. "'That girl', as you put it, was my sister... Misaki wouldn't have wanted him to die... even after... that's the only reason I'm not killing him myself! Misaki would have done everything in her power to rid him of this curse, and that's exactly what I plan to do!"

Musashi narrowed his eyes. "She... would never forgive me if I let Hikaru die. I'll find a way to save him from this curse, no matter what!"

Konoha Path

"He doesn't know what he means." Frei smirked. "You see, Itachi gave up his body to become a monster. I gave him powers using the stolen Nine, Eight and Seven tailed beast chakra. It's turned him into a ninja more powerful than any... but at the cost of his sanity. Everything he wanted that power for... well, he probably won't get it. He's losing more of his mind by the moment... but... well, you'll see!" Frei had a secret.

Itachi hissed like a monster and charged at Sasuke wildly! Unfortunately, the flames burnt so brightly around him that any attack would mean an almost certain death by fire for Sasuke! That's a bummer...
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