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Twilight Alignment Signups; TA:TLFSE... boo-yah
Topic Started: Feb 14 2006, 05:55 PM (4,387 Views)
Dark Phazon
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DarkBlade
Jul 2 2006, 02:21 PM
Welllll, first things first.

1. That's actually part of Jambi's life.
2. None of them are godmode.
3. I'm not using Super and Hyper in this RP.
4. Metal Jambi claims himself that he's unstoppable, like I said, he isn't immortal.
5. I created Jambi and Metal Jambi that way, it's just how I created them, there is hardly a godmode on both of them.
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........ I'M NOT TELLING YOU METAL JAMBI'S WEAKNESS!!! lol XD
7. Like I said.  "Like Sonic, He can go really fast, but, in his ability he can swim at a great rate of speed, dexterity, presicion, and agility. He can also go Super, and Hyper (If he want to beat his highest match.) like Sonic does."
8. (Eric Cartman's voice) Smiley, face! :)


I think you're somewhat confused by what BR said.

You wish for Jambi to be part of the group known as "Freedom Fighters". Now, what BR was saying was that he could not be a member of the Knothole division of the Freedom Fighters (because of the fact that no-one here knows Jambi, since he's your OC, and making it like we know him would be kind-of difficult due to that), but he could still be part of some other area's association of Freedom Fighters (since Freedom Fighters is supposed to be like a world-wide association, am I correct?)...

Also, he's likely saying that him having speed comparable to Sonic while also being a really quick and agile swimmer could be reaching too close to "Version Three Godmodding" territory, such that you should probobly slow him down a bit, but you can keep the "agile swimming" related stuff.
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Yeah, DP is right. 'What he said' about the Freedom Fighter thing. If him being part of the Knothole Freedom Fighters is "actually part of [his] life," then guess what, it's not anymore. :)

He shouldn't be able to go Super or Hyper. Even if he doesn't get to, which he won't, his ability to go Super/Hyper is major cliche, and makes him a little too powerful for an OC.

Do you know what a "cliche" is? It's something that's been done a thousand times before.
A Sonic OC with superspeed, three tails, and Super/Hyper power has been done more times than you can count. A specialty in swimming makes him a little less cliched.

So, "first things first," tone him down. You have no choice but to do so, but I'll say "please" anyway. Please. :) Make him part of a non-Knothole Freedom Fighter group, take away his ability to go Super or Hyper, and give him a specialty in swimming. Then he can join. Okay? :hs:
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Hrrmmm, well I edited the story. And I'm trying to tone things down a bit. I removed the "Freedom Fighters" thing. It should no longer be a Freedom Fighter. And as I said, I'm not using super, nor hyper in this RP. I will try to re-edit the story, and let's see how you feel of wether or not that I will join.

--PROFILES HAVE BEEN EDITED--

Name: Jambi
Age: About 13.
Species: Three-Tailed (Let's say, Kitsune/Mobian.)
Gender: Male
Size: Same as Sonic's.
Picture: See pg. 19
History: One time, something came up to him and blasted him in the air, and landed on a piece of ground that did not look like he was with the Freedom Fighters anymore. His thoughts were, for example: "What is this place?" "Was I carried into space?" "What's going on?" "I don't think I'm in Kansas anymore." There wasn't even a cityful of buildings. It was something else than a city, It was... "ROBOTROPOLIS?!?!??" Jambi freaked out. "I GOTTA GET OUTTA HERE!!!". So he did, entered the desert, and now he's lost, trying to get back before he loses himself.

Like Sonic, He can go fast, but, in his ability he can swim at a good rate of speed, dexterity, presicion, and agility. (I'm not using this abilty in this RP.)=> He can also go Super, and Hyper (If he want to beat his highest match.) like Sonic does.


Name: Metal Jambi
Age: None, he's an evil and mechanized copy of Jambi.
Species: Alike Metal Sonic's. Mech.
Gender: Male
Size: Same as Metal Sonic's.
Picture: See pg. 19
History: Once created by Eggman in the Death Egg, Eggman's plan was totally successful like Metal Sonic. He is an anti to things, people, and other species who oppose him. He's merciless, but his disability is going Super, but he's fine without it. He can do duties for Dr. Eggman, and gain his faction during his duty. Like Metal Sonic, he isn't immortal, there are weaknesses in him, but where?

He's seriously 100% pure evil, and he says that "There is nothing to stop me!". There is a way he can POSSIBLY say that when thinks he can win.

That's all for now!

--PROFILES EDITED AT July 4th, 2006, AT 1:46 - 1:47 PM PDT.--
--PROFILES RE-EDITED AT September 4th, 2006 AT 9:08 AM PDT.--
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Eh, good enough. ^^; Go ahead and join.
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Yayy!!! Going now.
Requested sprite of Jambi Sprite of Joyo Prower
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^Thanks to Fusion the Cat.

My Fan Character Biographies: Joyo Prower Sid the Hedgehog Jambi and Metal Jambi Lilly the Hedgehog Williston & Kartoran
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Naruto Episode 101 is awesome.

Thoughts that came through my mind.

"Your face."
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Cojo
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Guys, I went back reading and I'm lost.

After the whole deal with Nite dying the three Super Emeralds were scattered.

Shadow got one.
Overlord got one.
But the third one was never mentioned again. All that was said was that the emerald was teleported to the ship, and it hasn't been heard from again. So who has it now?

*unsolved mystery!*

If nobody knows what happened to it....Cojo has a great idea...
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Somethign I remember! It was taken to the Sunken Island! If I remember the name right, the opposite of Angel Island, where Macknuckles hails from.

At least, I'm pretty sure it's there!
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I believe AGOI is right. MacKnuckles has one Super Emerald, Shadow has another, and Overlord has the last.

Of course, those are the three super emeralds from the last RP. I'd say from the name of this one, we're gonna have some new ones soon! ^_^

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No...

The emerald that Overlord has IS that emerald. The enchidna dude stole it first, than overlord stole it from him.
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No, because if Overlord had that one, Alantinopolis would be destroyed. That's what BR said.
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:o Oh? My memory is pretty bad, so bad, sometimes I can't even remember a thing even a few seconds ago bad, sometimes I can't even remember a thing remember a thing even a few secondseconds ago bad.

Yeah. So: if anyone remembers, that'd be great. XD Frankly, I don't really care, Atlantinopolis can deal if you have something you'd rather do with that third Emerald, Cojo. :)
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"Actually," said Knyveton, "I'll just take it."
He ducked, slid past Cafe, grabbed a Super Emerald, and disappeared. He'd teleported away...
(( ><;; SO bad. ))




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ATLANTINOPOLIS - Super Emerald Shrine
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With a flash of light Knyveton teleported himself into the Super Emerald Shrine, a murky, dark room underneath the Sunken City of Atlantinopolis. From the ceiling hung a huge stone structure, exactly like the Master Emerald Shrine... except that it was upside-down and attached to the ceiling! Knyveton walked to the middle and started reaching above his head to fit the Super Emerald into its vaccum-sealed position.

"Good thing I managed to figure out this place's secret location long ago," he murmured to himself, "Or everyone here would've died. Stupid crappy Guardian."
There was a sound from the corner- -click- whirrr

ZAM! In a black flash he was tackled to the floor. It was OVERLORD!
"I don't think so. You have two choices- die here, or join us."
Knyveton coughed. "Never. There are people up there in that city who are running out of oxygen because of you accursed robots. I will die first-- but not before I save them!"
He struggled to no avail.

OVERLORD was motionless. "You needn't worry about them needing oxygen for much longer. And in any case you and I have the same goal- the conquest of the world. You want to rule the surface world, and I want to do the same."
Knyveton scowled. "The difference is, my foolish robot friend," he said, "That no civilians of any kind will come under harm under our rule, Atlantinopolis's rule, the rule of Echidnakind- whereas you have already shown a lack of concern for the innocent."

OVERLORD looked down at him. "Your choice has been made, mortal." He drove his fist through Knyveton's head.
(( >< Noooo!! ))


See he took one Super Emerald. Yes I do have a plan, but we need to work this out first.
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It’s not grave digging ‘cause this is for the RP, right?

Anyhow, as some will know, I’ll be having eight, super powerful Chaos Creatures to be dealt with, and will, eventually, be killed, or something else if it happens.

And what I would like to know, is if anyone would be interested in playing one or two.

Obviously, I’m already using Vamp and Slinger, and will also control their leader, name to revealed later.

The five include…

Tank!
His specialty is the ability to take a hit, or two, or three, or a lot!
He’s modeled after, you guessed it, an echidna! Much like Metal Knuckles, he’s slow, but his punch gives a giant wallop, plus the fact he’s three times the size of a normal echidna.

Cheet!
He’s the fastest around without being Sonic. He can reach nearly, almost sonic speed, but obviously not SONIC speed. Modeled after a cheetah Mobian, he tires easily and likes to finish fights fast. He has low endurance as well.

Arach!
Modeled after a giant spider, this Chaos Creature uses a sticky liquid to trap his opponents, then finish them off with a powerful acid. His hobbies include being creepy, staring to much at people, and long walks on the beach.

Odie!
An odd name for a Chaos Creature, he’s powerful but not to bright. However, he attacks at a farther range then Tank, and not quite as powerful. His attacks include a long tongue that can confuse and damage the enemy, and a breath that will leave nearly anything with a nose on the ground, gasping for air. He’s modeled after a Dog Mobian.

Doe!
Wise and sagely (Chaos Creature sagely), he’s modeled after a Deer Mobian, and looks fairly old actually. He does not attack, but with his abilities can power up and heal his fellow Chaos Creatures with ancient and powerful spells. If he must fight, he uses other spells to use various elemental attacks, though mostly water.

Now these are mostly guidelines. You could go off on another tangent with these guys if you wanted, maybe even a betrayer if you wanted.
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Oh, by the way...

GS and I have started up a little plan. A certain little plan.

But unfortunately, we need three Super Emeralds for it. For temporary use, of course, but we need three.

Sooooo... How can we achieve that?

And maybe I'd take Arach, AGoI, but I'm not sure yet.
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Let them Label me! Let them swear and curse at me as I tug humanity like a bucking bull into the darkness of the unknown, revealing its secrets to the sane and driving them MAD! In ages long past, I shall be looked upon as a tyrant and a savior! As a savant and as a fool! My work shall advance humanity long past its time, throw it into the unknown future and force it to grow strong or FALL! Years from now, when I will inevitably be removed, my work shall continue to progress, because these things cannot be denied! Governments will publicly criticize my work, but privately conduct research that advances it! I shall imprint myself into the annals of history, among the stars that shine as brightly as Albert Einstein, Isaac Newton, Benjamin Franklin, Dmitri Mendeleev, Nikola Tesla, and countless others! My work will shine as brightly as any star, and I AM ITS CREATOR!!!
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:3

We'll have three in no time, HA.

AGOI, it's normally not my place to say accepted on this RP, but BR is away so I have to assume rank.

And I say... OF COURSE! AWESOME! ODIE! HAHAHA! I can beat him... just push him off a table! XD

OOH! YES. The plan HA.

Sorry man, I'm not going to post right yet. It's taking all my brain power to try to win Round Two. I'll post later.

And no, you can't gravedig a RP unless the RP is over.
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