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| Nativ "Nat" Torisy<font color=0066FF>{Approved!}</font> | |
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| Topic Started: Nov 29 2008, 12:46 AM (58 Views) | |
| Grimmlocke | Nov 29 2008, 12:46 AM Post #1 |
 
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Name: Nativ “Nat” Torisy Age: 22 Species: Human Gender: Male Homeworld: Mimban Alliance: Unknown, at the moment. Class: Escaped slave, primitive Force Adept Lightsaber Form: None, as of now. (He doesn’t have a lightsaber) Appearance: If he were healthy, Nativ would be considered a rather good looking individual. His face is dominated by his expressive dark eyes, which look out at the world from atop a slightly upturned nose. His small mouth is almost always pressed into a thin line, since he worries almost constantly. His hair, when he has it, is dark brown, almost black. Currently though, he is entirely hairless. There is a small lump at the base of his neck, as well as faded tattoos that trace down his spine. He can usually be seen wearing rags, as a good set of clothes is a bit too expensive for an escaped slave to purchase. Bio: Nat Torisy was born to the primitive natives of Mimban, who believe themselves to be the children of the Gods. However, they are in reality the descendents of a group of Imperial Miners that decided it was time to live their lives on their own terms out in the swamps. Nat had a fairly average childhood among his people, learning to hunt the native wildlife and stealthily sneak up on unwary travelers that happened to show up in the tribe’s territory. When he was eight years old, Nat was selected by the local Shaman to become his apprentice. He moved out of his family’s hut and went to live with the old man, who began to instruct him in the ancient magic of the tribe. Any Jedi visiting the village would recognize the tribal magic as a primitive, more mystical means of using the Force, focusing on talismans and ornate rituals to affect the world around practitioners. It was only a matter of time before the other, more civilized locals decided it was time to put a stop to the “Swamp Bandits”. When Nat was sixteen, men armed with blasters and nets finally found the tribe’s village and wiped them out, carrying the survivors back to the nearest Mining Town for a “Trial”. All prisoners were summarily judged as guilty and sold into slavery by some of the more disreputable members of the town. Nat ended up in the possession of one of the less affluent Hutts living on Nar Shadda. The Hutt, Cargalla by name, was so poor that he couldn’t even afford to have the usual explosive devices implanted in his slaves. Instead, he had to settle on a small implant that delivered an intense electrical shock directly to the central nerve bundles in the sentients he owned. In the case of humans, the implants were connected to the nerves in the spinal column. Over the next 6 years, Nat was brutalized in almost every way possible, and the almost constant use of the electrical device in his neck eventually traumatized his hair follicles, resulting in the loss of all his body hair. Beaten, mistreated, malnourished, and near the breaking point, Nat decided it was finally time to make a break for it. He was used to the pain of the implant now, and he figured he could hide the occasional full-body spasm that the shock triggered. Using a small, fairly worthless crystal he had been able to palm when no one was looking as a focus, Nat used his meager Force abilities to float a key card from a sleeping guard into the lock of his cell. From there, the young man engineered a slave escape, hiding amidst the five-man group that sprinted out of Cargalla’s home. Now free, Nat hopes to make enough money to have the implant removed, as well as a new teacher to complete his education and make him a full Shaman. Using his Force abilities, he is slowly accumulating wealth by levitating items from the grasp of unwitting pedestrians. |
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| Korin Beck™ | Dec 14 2008, 02:21 PM Post #2 |
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I'd just like to say I like how you left your character opened for new ideas and didn't seal him off for one fate and one fate only. Very creative and I approve. |
 The Outcasts Korin's Profile C.L.I.K.'s profile Xantalus' Profile Merick's Profile Part 2 Part 3 Zant's Profile Go on, click. Force Powers Zant, Merick and Korin Force Fire - Coming from the wrist, the Force is concentrated and heated into one point in the arm and travels to the hand where it launches at the target. Force Absorb Extreme - Able to suck in anybody, thing, or force power. Force Aura - This alows the user's awarness and speed to greaten and also their Force moves enchance. When used with the Realm, it is called The Force United. Force Realm - Appears that the user moves at intense speeds but becomes one with the Force. Person is not visible and room becomes blured. Can be countered by both people using it. The Force United - Activated when Force Realm and Aura are in use. When using this the person is sent in to a 10 hour comma and depletes all Force energy. But this also alows the person to defeat there enmy with no struggle. If this is used by both people, it will end a draw. Xantalus Depletion of the Light - With a snap of the fingers the victim is withering in unbelievable pain and suffereing. Once the pain is over the user is gone and the victim is bleeding from the mouth, ears, eyes and nose, but will stop soon and is not fatal. Paradox of Darkness - Releases the victims inner fears and can cause one to go crazy if not strong minded. Wave of Light - A force push that can take down an entire city. Planet of Darkness - A ball made much like the fireball except it is a dark ball of energy set into the ground by Xantalus, eating a planet and everything that touches the ground, within a month. This can also be launched at a person and is fatal. The Force United Perfected - Xantalus has accomplished the ultimate move just like United but instead doesn't send him into a comma Completion - Once a mysterious Force Power no one but Xantalus knew. It became known as several things including "The Gift of the Force". This power ended up sending everyone to their own paradise, bringing all of Xantalus' victims back to life and sending them along with Merick and Zant to a parrallel universe where Jedi and Sith were allies. Xantalus now resides in a galaxy of darkness and chaos, filled with fighters of phenominal power...and he wouldn't have it any other way. Korin Beck Euphoria - So far the only move Korin has made on his own. This move resembles Xantalus' Completion but Korin uses it for different reasons. If someone is suffering or at the brink of death, Korin uses this move to calm them down if they only have little time left or in a great deal of pain. Korin could use it the same as Xantalus did but sees no reason to do so. Analia Mendore Force Whisper - Analia is able to speak to the Jedi and Sith of time's past and the souls of those that are currently residing in Korin. Gentle Amelioration - Depending how far she reaches out, Analia can heal anyone ranging from herself, to a person injured on the ground to the group around her within ten feet. Each stage takes more Force than the previous, leaving her more tired and fatigued. Cairo Kinaro Mind Puppet - With this move, Cairo can control anyone's actions and speech by reaching into their mind. It's almost a form of advanced mind trick. Cairo can keep this up as long as the connection isn't disrupted in anyway like someone knocking him over or his Force Energy wears thin. Rev Zabek Lightning Dragon - While not exactly what its name says, Rev has the power to manipulate Force Lightning, ranging from making it turn corners or avoid people, to the form a large deadly dragon. The dragon form is the form that Zev tends to go with and thus its name was made. Red Lightning - This lightning is Rev's preferred move of choice. It's not much different than normal Force Lightning and no more powerful than it but the only other Sith able to use it was Darth Desolous. Dark Lightning - A dangerously powerful move that when Rev uses it drains his Force Energy and life force greatly. The only person ever known to absorb and block it was Korin who suffered severe burn marks on his hands. Both warriors were badly hurt afterwards. This is a powerful move that obliterates anything in its path. Rev rarely uses it and unlike the normal lightning, it cannot be controlled or manipulated. Dark Rage - This is apparently Force Aura's much darker and dangerous cousin. Zev releases all anger and Force inside him causing his strength, Force potential, and speed to skyrocket. When Korin used Force Aura, he was barely able to counter. The air around Zev becomes barely tollerable as the heat reaches massive levels. The only other move that can counter this move is Force Aura and just barely. Jade Aurelia Wave of Light - Just like Xantalus' move, this Force Push can take down entire buildings and sometimes cities. Force Paroxysm - Jade brings all the Force around her and inside her and tightly contricts it around her then releases it, knocking everything away with amazing force. This power is very destructive and isn't used often at all unless an emergency presents itself. If she's not careful, Jade can hurt her friends with this move as well. Group Attacks Lightning Frenzy - Jade, Korin and Zev all combine and launch Force lightning at a similar target. Brute Force - Korin and Zev both turn on Force Aura and Dark Rage, attacking at the same time. Jubilee Tactic - Analia tells the Force Spirits to aid Jade when using Force Paroxysm to make it a less deadly attack. Dark Amelioration - Zev uses his Dark Lightning while Analia concentrates on using Gentle Amelioration on him. Puppet Rage - While Cairo has Force Puppet locked in, Zev can activate Force Rage on the person Cairo currently has control of. | |
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| Korin Beck™ | Dec 14 2008, 02:21 PM Post #3 |
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<center><font color="#1E90FF">Congratulations, your profile has been approved. </font><font color="#808080">By a staff member or RPG Staff team. Feel free to Role Play. Your SWU RP Journey begins now. *If you don't see yourself in the right group, ex: Jedi, Sith, then please notify a staff member and we will fix that error</font><p><font color="#808080">Thanks, Star Wars United</font></center> |
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The Outcasts Korin's Profile C.L.I.K.'s profile Xantalus' Profile Merick's Profile Part 2 Part 3 Zant's Profile Go on, click. Force Powers Zant, Merick and Korin Force Fire - Coming from the wrist, the Force is concentrated and heated into one point in the arm and travels to the hand where it launches at the target. Force Absorb Extreme - Able to suck in anybody, thing, or force power. Force Aura - This alows the user's awarness and speed to greaten and also their Force moves enchance. When used with the Realm, it is called The Force United. Force Realm - Appears that the user moves at intense speeds but becomes one with the Force. Person is not visible and room becomes blured. Can be countered by both people using it. The Force United - Activated when Force Realm and Aura are in use. When using this the person is sent in to a 10 hour comma and depletes all Force energy. But this also alows the person to defeat there enmy with no struggle. If this is used by both people, it will end a draw. Xantalus Depletion of the Light - With a snap of the fingers the victim is withering in unbelievable pain and suffereing. Once the pain is over the user is gone and the victim is bleeding from the mouth, ears, eyes and nose, but will stop soon and is not fatal. Paradox of Darkness - Releases the victims inner fears and can cause one to go crazy if not strong minded. Wave of Light - A force push that can take down an entire city. Planet of Darkness - A ball made much like the fireball except it is a dark ball of energy set into the ground by Xantalus, eating a planet and everything that touches the ground, within a month. This can also be launched at a person and is fatal. The Force United Perfected - Xantalus has accomplished the ultimate move just like United but instead doesn't send him into a comma Completion - Once a mysterious Force Power no one but Xantalus knew. It became known as several things including "The Gift of the Force". This power ended up sending everyone to their own paradise, bringing all of Xantalus' victims back to life and sending them along with Merick and Zant to a parrallel universe where Jedi and Sith were allies. Xantalus now resides in a galaxy of darkness and chaos, filled with fighters of phenominal power...and he wouldn't have it any other way. Korin Beck Euphoria - So far the only move Korin has made on his own. This move resembles Xantalus' Completion but Korin uses it for different reasons. If someone is suffering or at the brink of death, Korin uses this move to calm them down if they only have little time left or in a great deal of pain. Korin could use it the same as Xantalus did but sees no reason to do so. Analia Mendore Force Whisper - Analia is able to speak to the Jedi and Sith of time's past and the souls of those that are currently residing in Korin. Gentle Amelioration - Depending how far she reaches out, Analia can heal anyone ranging from herself, to a person injured on the ground to the group around her within ten feet. Each stage takes more Force than the previous, leaving her more tired and fatigued. Cairo Kinaro Mind Puppet - With this move, Cairo can control anyone's actions and speech by reaching into their mind. It's almost a form of advanced mind trick. Cairo can keep this up as long as the connection isn't disrupted in anyway like someone knocking him over or his Force Energy wears thin. Rev Zabek Lightning Dragon - While not exactly what its name says, Rev has the power to manipulate Force Lightning, ranging from making it turn corners or avoid people, to the form a large deadly dragon. The dragon form is the form that Zev tends to go with and thus its name was made. Red Lightning - This lightning is Rev's preferred move of choice. It's not much different than normal Force Lightning and no more powerful than it but the only other Sith able to use it was Darth Desolous. Dark Lightning - A dangerously powerful move that when Rev uses it drains his Force Energy and life force greatly. The only person ever known to absorb and block it was Korin who suffered severe burn marks on his hands. Both warriors were badly hurt afterwards. This is a powerful move that obliterates anything in its path. Rev rarely uses it and unlike the normal lightning, it cannot be controlled or manipulated. Dark Rage - This is apparently Force Aura's much darker and dangerous cousin. Zev releases all anger and Force inside him causing his strength, Force potential, and speed to skyrocket. When Korin used Force Aura, he was barely able to counter. The air around Zev becomes barely tollerable as the heat reaches massive levels. The only other move that can counter this move is Force Aura and just barely. Jade Aurelia Wave of Light - Just like Xantalus' move, this Force Push can take down entire buildings and sometimes cities. Force Paroxysm - Jade brings all the Force around her and inside her and tightly contricts it around her then releases it, knocking everything away with amazing force. This power is very destructive and isn't used often at all unless an emergency presents itself. If she's not careful, Jade can hurt her friends with this move as well. Group Attacks Lightning Frenzy - Jade, Korin and Zev all combine and launch Force lightning at a similar target. Brute Force - Korin and Zev both turn on Force Aura and Dark Rage, attacking at the same time. Jubilee Tactic - Analia tells the Force Spirits to aid Jade when using Force Paroxysm to make it a less deadly attack. Dark Amelioration - Zev uses his Dark Lightning while Analia concentrates on using Gentle Amelioration on him. Puppet Rage - While Cairo has Force Puppet locked in, Zev can activate Force Rage on the person Cairo currently has control of. | |
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