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POETRY COMPETITION-VOTING!; mwahahha, fun stuff.
Topic Started: Jul 14 2006, 10:13 PM (387 Views)
+Ms. Housewife
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Please vote for whichever entry you like best. Authors have been left anonymous just in case we have lazy voters who like favorites.
-No voting for your own entry. I know who you are. ^_~
-No flaming poems...or better yet.. no disscussion other than voting and a reason. (optional)


Entry #1:
Quote:
 
The Howling Winds of Midnight
Woke up the startled Angel
Lures her to the edge of Dreams
Taunt Her with its Haunting Melody
Of what she can never have:
The joy of Life
The beauty of Death.
She can never
Smile
To dazzle the sun
Or Cry
To drown out her terror
She can only watch
As men toll their lives
In Misery
In Love
In Hate
That only they know.
And She can only watch.
In infinity emptiness
She can only Dream
What of and could’ve been.
She will gladly
Trade eternity
For a single life-time
Of Sorrow and Joy.


#2:
Quote:
 
What would you do if I fell and died,
What would you do; Laugh or cry,
What could I do but dream and fly,
Theres nothing to do except run and die.

There's no more reason for you to lie,
I get what you're saying; So go away,
What could I do but weep and pray,
What would you do; There's nothing to say.

What I want is for you to stay,
What I do is chase you away,
All I need is for you to care,
I just need a life that's fair.


#3
Quote:
 
Our lives collided,
The Mask has Faded,
I can't belive
I've been so jaded.

Here we go,
around and around
but will our true love
ever be found?

Forever we stayed
to find this standstill
the parts were flawless
we had seperate wills,

We part our ways,
my mask appears
forever I shall stay
behind this fake Vanir.


#4
Quote:
 
The last tear drops,
The last sunlight fades,
And as I close my eyes,
There you were.

You held me close,
You cried silently,
Because u didn't want me to,
To see you cry.

My life is passing by,
Every moment,
Every minute,
now.

As we're together for the last time,
I told you how i truely felt about you,
And you tell me you love me too,
But it was all too late.

I'm dying any second now,
Im still alive because you came,
You came to see me this time,
And once more, you didn't ignore me,
But you loved me....

As the shadows behind the trees grew bigger,
My candle's light grew dimmer,
My eyes are closing slowly,
My hands are falling,
As the tiny spark of light fell into the darkness.


#5
Quote:
 
I always think
The strangest things
When it starts
To pour outside

But then I say
That’s not true
And my mind wanders
In it’s own vain

It’s the stupidest thing
That makes it happen
The stupidest songs
Make me cry

It’s because of you
My mind collides
But with whose
Is it you?

I wish you
Would open those eyes
Make these thoughts
Leave me in time.

I don’t want to think
The strangest things
When it starts
To pour outside

I don’t want to say
That’s not true
And then wander
In my mind’s plain

I want you
To say you
Love me too.


#6
Quote:
 
"The Big Liar Expose"

Last night I commited suicide
To keep away from you
But I didn't die.

Left in pain and agony,
Why can't this end?
Let me go,
Just let me go.

Call me a coward, I don't mind.
Put me out of this misery
I think I've lost myself and I'll never find,
Nothing's the same anymore.
I'm a stranger to myself,
Why have I done this?
What have I done?
I'm not ready to go yet,
I'm not ready to go.

In my agony,
I've wished myself a happy ending,
And gotten none.
Why has this become,
What has become,
Oh why did you wish this curse on me?
Lies, all lies.
It was my choice, not yours.

I am a coward,
I am lost,
I am found,
I am what was and what will never be.

Actually, on second thought, you can kill me.
Just please go get my dry cleaning.


The voting deadline has been extended to when Quan returns or later.
I need to talk over the tie. Please vote more/b]


Our contestants are (in no order):
Me, Vanir, Tiffany, SoylentGreen, Quan, and .Essence.
One entry was disqualified for it didn't meet the required number of lines.

Have fun~

~Ren
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SoylentGreen
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#4 GMV. I like the mood to it and the flow is excellent. All the others were fine, but that one popped.
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Vanir
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#6 FTW. I love it. the imagery the darkness. GOD I LOVE IT. but the ending kinda killed it... but it was the best IMO.

Laters.Jason
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your favorite nightmare
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#5

It's not Quan's right? It better not beeeeeeeeeee.
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+Ms. Housewife
EDADA WRYYYY
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It's not. No worries.
C'mon people... we need votes...
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+Kitzutsuita
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#1 GMW :] It just seems to flow the best out of the rest, besides mine of course XD
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frozen.time

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^ No wonder she's laughing her butt off. -_-

#4. It's beautiful.
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+Kitzutsuita
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Vote people vote! Get more votes in!

*cough*

no disscussion other than voting and a reason.
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Mrs. Housewife

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#5. I love the intro. Its really like me. o_____o
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Floral.Fallal
I AM TEH YUNIE! =O
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#1

I loved the story behind it, and the imagery it made for me. I could picture it in my head as I read the poem. I think that it stands out from the others. and I just love it. ^__^
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+igo
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secret l0ver
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=]

Good luck everyone.

#1 GMV because I think it's very mysterious and I find it the most interesting.
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fire_crotch
newbie :)
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#5

the others were well written, but bored me too soon :(. 5 caught my attention.

:unsure:
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SoylentGreen
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FIRST ROUND ELEMINATIONS are entries 2, 3, 4, and 6.

IN A SHOCKING UPSET, 1 AND 5 ARE TIED!

W0000000000000000 tie-breaker. SOMEONE WHO HASN'T VOTED YET, VOTE!

*gets warned for stealing someone else's job*

[adult swim]
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+Ms. Housewife
EDADA WRYYYY
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Huh. Thanks SG. I kinda kicked this off while in Japan. ^^;;
I'm gonna leave this open another week and wait for Quan to come back... then I'll see what we'll do.

~Ren
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Mrs. Housewife

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HAHAHA! *ROFLMAO* *cough*

It's only because I happen to know who those two are by. Keke. 'Kay, this is not spam. Err, I'll go find some innocent soul & make them vote.
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+Kitzutsuita
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Hm.. it's a tie breaker ren so i guess u gonna have to make a new topic with #1 and #5 :] Just so that it's more noticeable :] and people can revote for either one XD
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