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mag. cover
Topic Started: Jan 18 2006, 03:18 PM (224 Views)
SaKuRaStaRs

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hii. this is an assignment for my graphic arts class. i was suppose to design a magazine cover. critize please and if you will, please tell me how i could make it better. thanks.

http://img498.imageshack.us/img498/6518/untitled11qz.jpg
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Looks very good.

The last "a" in "Bringing you the best of Anime & Manga" blends in with the background and makes it look weird. It kinda looks like a "d". And in the bottom right corner you could add a small picture of a cosplay costume, or something extra, maybe a picture of a character from the manga (Battle Royale) you mention? Most magazines have a small picture of what they're talking about. You could also add a page number of where they can find the article/manga. (Ex: "DIY:.... costume - more info on page ##" or something of that sort.)

It is really good how it is. I just gave you some "tips" on how to make it look more like a magazine cover. The background and the picture look really good. Awesome job ;) .
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SaKuRaStaRs

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i didn't notice all those things you mentioned. thanks so much. ^__^
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um.. it doesn't look like a magazine cover that much since there are not many little topics that are on the side of the magazine, maybe add some more topics and put it on the cover and the font of the word "Jaded" just doesn't match with the magazine, it just makes the magazine look off...It looks like a manga cover instead of a magazine cover lol.
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JDM > USDM
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Haha that's pretty awesome but maybe you can put a price above the barlines for canada and u.s. =)
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This is really cool! Haha, you guys do awesome projects. I love the colorful background. I guess it would look better if the words didn't go all the way in the middle, but stayed aligned sort of. Hah, Quan, I think it's supposed to be a magazine for manga/anime. Excellent quality; nice job!!
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I think it's cute, the background and pic are adorable. The barcode looks a little unclear, though.
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Good job. Maybe there could be a few more most important topics? Well, my sister had to do one of these for her digital arts class. Her birthday is in December, she made it in December so she had, Throw an awesome birthday party! | Interview with...Johnny Depp! | Inside Hogwarts | A few simple twirling moves!
All the things she loves...
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