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I Hate To Say It; But I Told You So
Topic Started: May 21 2007, 08:08 AM (205 Views)
Chris Cash
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*We are taken up to the skybox shortly after Chronicles 92, where Chris Cash and company are celebrating their newly won Titles. Chris Cash is wearing both of them, one slung over each shoulder as he approaches the cameras for his victory speech.*

Chris Cash: "Hello, for those of you who have been living under a rock, my name is Chris Cash and I am your new Unified World Heavyweight Tag Team Champion! And for those of you who doubted me, I hate to say this, but I told you so! A few weeks back, I put the entire tag division on notice that myself and Izak were the only ones worthy to challenge for these Titles. And we proved it tonight. Not only did we beat the former champions, we had to contend with their manager and their best friend. So that made it a 4 on 2 advantage for them. thankfully, Enigmatic had a little bit of an accident earlier on in the night, so it was only a still unfair 3 on to disadvantage for us. But we still overcame the odds and won. Then again, according to an exclusive interview with the Wrecking Crews parents, Enigmatic didn't have an accident. Oh no. Both him and Bomb WERE an accident! By my records, that makes us 3-1 against the Wrecking Crew, and 2-0 when we were challengeing for the Titles. Did I mention that I hate to say it, but I told you so that we were the only logical choice for the Tag Team Champions?"

"So this moves us on to Clarkie-boy. In case you didn't know the golden rule of wrestling, whoever has the Gold, makes the rules. And last I checked, the Essential hold 3 out of the 5 Titles here. I'd say we hold the majority of the gold and we can make any rules we want. If we want to run around backstage attacking whoever and whatever we want, just chalk it up to the Golden Rule. If we want to call your mother a whore, then by the Golden Rule, she is. Do you think you can intimidate us by putting us in a match against Canadian kaos and some over weight balding man? Everyone knows that everything that is made in Canada is inferrior to the United States. So much inferrior that border security isn't even worried about illegal Canadians coming into the country because they are to dumb to try it! And the fact that this is a Non-Disqualification match, you just sent an open invitation for Izak to get involved in the match. Not a smart move on your part, Clarkie-boy"

"As for my first Title defence, there doesn't seem to be a tag team here in PoW that is even worth my time. The Wrecking Crew prolly have a rematch clause, but Enigmatic is in no shape to wrestle. Corpse Soldier doesn't even have a partner. Midwest Mayhem? Please, they are the butt of every single joke in every single federation. Divine Nightmare? They lost to Toga....Magic did it twice! But we all remember what happened last time I held the Unified World Heavyweight Tag Team Titles...the Tag Team Division was competitive again! Hopefully history will repeat itself and I'll have some half way descent challenges. Because nothing is better than Cash....except for maybe Gold...."

*Chris Cash lifts both of the Titles up, one in each arm and does the victory pose as he goes back to the celebration. His little party is cut short by.....*
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Hector Mercado
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*The door to the sky box swings open. Hector Mercado walks through it. He heads straight for the bar and pulls two beers from the fridge. Chris Cash is watching all of this with a look of amazment on his face. Hector opens both of the beers and walks up to Chris.*



Chris Cash: Are you lost or something? The all you can eat chinese food buffett is down the road.


BD: Chris this beer is for you.


*Hector sets the beer down on the table and Chris picks it up.*


BD: To Chris Cash, one half of the newest tag team champions of the world.


*Hector go to do the cheers motion with Chris but he doesn't move. Chris just stares at him almost in dis-belief at the audasity of Hector ruining his celebration.*


BD: What's the matter Chris, don't want to celebrate with me? That's ashame because you may have won those titles without my help but it's sure as hell gonna be because of me that you keep those titles for the next two weeks. You see you're not gonna have a chance to defend them next week because you are going to be busy getting your ass kicked in a 6 man tag match. And after that you are going to have no choice but to face me one on one with no help from your buddies at the pay per view. So you see Chris there is almost no way that you can lose those belts within the next two weeks. So instead of standing there like a deer in the headlights maybe you should be thanking me for extending your tag team title run two weeks longer than it should be.


*With that said Hector taps his beer on the tag team title belt, smirks and walks out.*
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Mark Williams
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Just a suggestion, stop using so many spaces between lines, like so

*The door to the sky box swings open. Hector Mercado walks through it. He heads straight for the bar and pulls two beers from the fridge. Chris Cash is watching all of this with a look of amazment on his face. Hector opens both of the beers and walks up to Chris.*

Chris Cash: Are you lost or something? The all you can eat chinese food buffett is down the road.

BD: Chris this beer is for you.

*Hector sets the beer down on the table and Chris picks it up.*

BD: To Chris Cash, one half of the newest tag team champions of the world.

*Hector go to do the cheers motion with Chris but he doesn't move. Chris just stares at him almost in dis-belief at the audasity of Hector ruining his celebration.*

BD: What's the matter Chris, don't want to celebrate with me? That's ashame because you may have won those titles without my help but it's sure as hell gonna be because of me that you keep those titles for the next two weeks. You see you're not gonna have a chance to defend them next week because you are going to be busy getting your ass kicked in a 6 man tag match. And after that you are going to have no choice but to face me one on one with no help from your buddies at the pay per view. So you see Chris there is almost no way that you can lose those belts within the next two weeks. So instead of standing there like a deer in the headlights maybe you should be thanking me for extending your tag team title run two weeks longer than it should be.

*With that said Hector taps his beer on the tag team title belt, smirks and walks out.*
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Hanibal
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or if I could throw in my 2 cents...

if you want your rp to be longer, space out that massive block paragraph at the end. And by space out and I don't mean double space, but ad some description, reactions from the crowd, Hector's mannerisms etc. Hope that helps...
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Tyler Graham
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When did boxcar become the rping rubicon?
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Chris Cash
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*Chris Cash looks at Hector for a moment and then a smirk comes across his face as he speaks.*

Chris Cash: "Sorry, this is a private party and by invitation only. You see, we have all the A-listers here. The NEW Tag Team Champions, The North American Champion, and this years Smash hit, Tyler Graham. Face it, fatso, your not on the A-list. Hell, your not even on the Z-list. You see, we have caviar and champaign here, not beer and hot wings. Just like out tastes, our style is to sophisticated for you to understand."

*The Man in Black, adjusts his Titles, before walking around, almost as if he is stalking his prey.*

Chris Cash: "Do you seriously think that you are the sole reason that I'm not defending these Titles for the next two weeks? Please, don't flatter yourself. Clark had to make Canadian Kaos reunite just so I'd have some half way descent competition. After all, the Tag Division was pretty much in the crapper. But just like it happened last time, I will recreate an interest in the Tag Division by holding these Titles. But just so you don't think I'm spewing hot air. lets take another look at the Tag Team Division, shall we? Do you really think any team currently in the Division has a chance against me? I beat the odds and beat the 'record breaking' reign of the Wrecking Crew, who some may say is the best Tag Team in the History of PoW...except for I do have a winning record against them, so how good does that make me?"

"You see, if Clarkie-boy wants the Tag Team Division to light up again, he can't use candles. No, he needed someone who could be a torch. He needed someone to creat instant heat on an other wise cold division. He needed someone controversial. And we all know, Cash creates controversy. But lets look at you for just one second. To borrow a phrase from my former manager, The Truth is, I won my rematch for the Titles....Did you win your rematch for the North American Title? Nope. Do you even have a partner to challenge me for these Titles? Nope. In fact, other than your destined Doom next week, do you have any business what so ever interuppting what is quite possibly the biggest celebration in PoW History?" NOPE! So why don't you get the hell out of the Skybox and please, don't come back."

*Chris Cash now stands eye to eye with Hector, as Izak is trying to keep the two seperate....Then....
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