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| Tweet Topic Started: May 15 2007, 06:46 PM (76 Views) | |
| Nate Wiley | May 15 2007, 06:46 PM Post #1 |
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The POW North American Champion
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The Rookie is found inside of his locker room lefting weights, doing snatches, and push ups with his trainer. Meanwhile, a DVD of The Rookie's matches was playing on the screen which was attachted to the wall. The two genetlemen speak among thereselves. Trainer: Good work out rookie, you've havent lost your touch as far as i can see. The Rookie: I never said i lost my touch, i said i may be a little rusty because of the hiatus. Trainer: Well, it has been along time since you've locked horns rook..but honestly i know you still got it kid. The Rookie: Yea, well i know i do. I've overcame alot of odds in my career and became victorious most of the time. The rookie gestures the camera to the way of the wall where the his dvd is playing matches of his old PWF days The Rookie: Although i feel as if i am one of the best in this industry, i do have flaws, i do take losses, and I think what i did wrong that made me lose. Trainer: Yea, i remember when you took you first lost you didnt take that too well. Rook, you was punching dents in lockers, kicking over coolers of waters, and some more shit. Rookie laughs Trainer: As time went along, you became more "at ease with defeat". Loki, remember him Rook? Rookie face changes The Rookie: Yea, i remember that psyco bastard. Trainer: Out of all your foes, i believe he got the best out of you, and you were at your best then. The Rookie: I am at my best then, and i am at my best now. Yea i can say that, that sick fuck did make me say hmmmmm. But where is he now? Trainer: Now, time has changed, and your in the POW with some of the finest athletes america has yet to see, and you facing one of POW Champions. The Rookie: Yea, Hanibal. Trainer: From what i know, he's undefeated. The Rookie: Ok, what are you sayin? I was once undefeated. I mean all good things must come to a end, and his streak will end soon. Trainer: True, but who says its gonna be you that ends his streak? The Rookie: You know what, your right, who says imma give him his first "L". But let me tell you this, If i lose, it'll be the last time in a long time that i will, and you can bet that! After The rookie said that, The trainer pointed to the screen and The Rookie turns around, looks at the T.V. screen and watched a clip from Chronicles 91 when Hawaiian Bryan faced Hanibal[.I] Trainer: You see that man, he's got the same god given talent that you have and i honestly thing, this match at Chronicles 92 when you and him lock up. I think its going to be something to remember. T.V. Fades black and The Rookie looks up at the trainer, slowly he walks toward the treadmil, but spots him getting pinned for the 3 count on the T.V. screen. The Rookie: Losing isn't easy...well at least to me, and i really think that everytime i have lost, that I've bounced back with much impact, and demanded respect on way or another ,and everytime I lost, i noticed my mistakes, flaws, and thats a reason why I will accept it, but it does nothing but make me better for my next like "30 matches". Trainer: You know that is true tho, when you do lose rook, you be on a streak yourself..... Camera fades black after a laugh between the two men |
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| Mark Williams | May 15 2007, 07:07 PM Post #2 |
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Better than you
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Just a few quick tips, try using spell check in your RP's, it generally comes off looking better and more "professional". Also, try only using one space between lines. If you don't have microsoft word I'll gladly spell check for you, take this for example... The Rookie is found inside of his locker room lifting weights, doing snatches, and push ups with his trainer. Meanwhile, a DVD of The Rookie's matches was playing on the screen which was attached to the wall. The two gentlemen speak among themselves. Trainer: Good work out rookie, you haven’t lost your touch as far as I can see. The Rookie: I never said I lost my touch, I said I may be a little rusty because of the hiatus. Trainer: Well, it has been along time since you've locked horns Rook..but honestly I know you still got it kid. The Rookie: Yea, well I know I do. I've overcome a lot of odds in my career and became victorious most of the time. The Rookie gestures the camera to the way of the wall where the his DVD is playing matches of his old PWF days The Rookie: Although I feel as if I am one of the best in this industry, I do have flaws, I do take losses, and I think what i did wrong that made me lose. Trainer: Yeah, I remember when you took you first lost you didn’t take that too well. Rook, you were punching dents in lockers, kicking over coolers of waters, and some more shit. Rookie laughs Trainer: As time went along, you became more "at ease with defeat". Loki, remember him Rook? Rookie face changes The Rookie: Yea, I remember that psycho bastard. Trainer: Out of all your foes, i believe he got the best out of you, and you were at your best then. The Rookie: I am at my best then, and I am at my best now. Yea I can say that, that sick fuck did make me say hmmmmm. But where is he now? Trainer: Now, time has changed, and you’re in the POW with some of the finest athletes America has yet to see, and you facing one of POW Champions. The Rookie: Yeah, Hanibal. Trainer: From what I know, he's undefeated. The Rookie: Ok, what are you sayin? I was once undefeated. I mean all good things must come to an end, and his streak will end soon. Trainer: True, but who says it’s gonna be you that ends his streak? The Rookie: You know what, your right, who says imma give him his first "L". But let me tell you this, If I lose, it'll be the last time in a long time that I will, and you can bet that! After The rookie said that, The trainer pointed to the screen and The Rookie turns around, looks at the T.V. screen and watched a clip from Chronicles 91 when Hawaiian Bryan faced Hanibal. Trainer: You see that man, he's got the same god given talent that you have and I honestly thing, this match at Chronicles 92 when you and him lock up. I think its going to be something to remember. T.V. Fades black and The Rookie looks up at the trainer, slowly he walks toward the treadmill, but spots him getting pinned for the 3 count on the T.V. screen. The Rookie: Losing isn't easy...well at least to me, and I really think that every time I have lost, that I've bounced back with much impact, and demanded respect on way or another, and every time I lost, I noticed my mistakes, flaws, and that’s a reason why I will accept it, but it does nothing but make me better for my next like "30 matches". Trainer: You know that is true though, when you do lose Rook, you be on a streak yourself..... Camera fades black after a laugh between the two men. |
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