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The Assassin's Dojo; Open to All
Topic Started: Apr 11 2006, 03:33 PM (900 Views)
The Assassin {MM2}
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"You wish for force and lightsaber-specific training, or all around? You will also learn how to type better while you are here. I am glad to see that you use quotes and no *'s. It makes things much crisper and neater, in my opinion."

The assassin dissapears, and standing in his place is Desperaito Compos, the fallen Jar'Kai master. His two lightsabers hang at his waist, and his long black hair frames his face, covering his forehead, and curling slightly into his eyes. He wears long black and red robes, in a similar style to Anakin Skywalker's during the end of the clone wars. His grey skin belies his Shape-shifter origins.
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Vader06
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i wish for lightsaber and force training master. Force training hopefully includes force powers like lightning, choke and harnessing energy.
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"That will come in time. First, we're going to have to improve your grammar and typing skills. Fix the following statement and repost it:"

suzy jumps over the river and laughed. "i is good at this!" she yells to tom.


After I consider your typing skills worthwhile, we'll move on.
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Susy jumps over the river and laughed. "I am good at this!" she yells to Tom.
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The Assassin {MM2}
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Almost perfect.

Susy jumps over the river and laughed.

The verb tenses don't agree. It should be either, "Suzy jumped over the river and laughed." or "Suzy jumps over the river and laughs."

The common RP way would be the first one, in past tense.

Also, her name is Suzy, not Susy.


"Very good. You must always type like that when in my dojo, and preferably just always. Now, draw your saber and attack, I wish to assess your skills."

With that the assassin drew his saber, flesh coming in contact with cold metal, and he grinned. He drew his other saber in his other hand as well, igniting both. The one in his right hand was a midnight blue. The one in his left hand was a light orange. He held them in a typical Jar'Kai ready stance, loosely at his sides, in a 45 degree angle from his body.
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Vader06
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*i might not immediatly respond...watching gay abe fight

Shorty ignites his saber. It is colored midnight black. He stands there waiting for the next move.
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"I am watching that fight as well. Rather pitiful, but if anyone can change him, Advent can."

Desp waits. "You attack first, I wish to know of your skills."
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*flaming sword of death

shorty extends hands, closes his eyes and begins chanting. Slowly a large ball of flame appears in between his hands. Shorty with one last yell, releses the ball as it splits into three. all headed for his master
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shorty extends hands, closes his eyes and begins chanting. Slowly a large ball of flame appears in between his hands. Shorty with one last yell, releses the ball as it splits into three. all headed for his master.
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Shorty extends his hands, closing his eyes, and begins to chant.  Slowly, a large ball of flame appears between his hands.  With one last yell, Shorty releases the ball.  As he does so, it splits into three seperate balls of fire, all heading for his master.


"Now, I've seen you fight before, and trust me, never start of different fights the exact same way. Also, that entire move is invalid, because you had early stated that you had a lightsaber in your hands. I doubt that I lightstaber could tolerate that kind of heat. Also, what force power is that, exactly? Remember, in Star Wars RPs, you are limited to what the force may do."
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ok pretend that post never happend

shorty runs towards him and at the last moment, flips over his head. He lands and lets out a swoop of his saber at his masters leg
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