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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 8 2006, 02:00 PM (689 Views) | |
| gamemasterdevil | Mar 8 2006, 02:00 PM Post #1 |
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Prologue “So, this is how the life of the Hero of Time ends. Pitiful.” A man stood over Link, his sword drawn. It was silver, with a purple edge, obviously poison. The handle was crimson-red from the blood of the wielder. “I thought you fought much better than that. I was wrong, I guess. You are a disgrace among heroes, Link, the Hero of Time!” Link was on the ground, dying. His sword skills were no match for the strange assassin. The poison had also done him in. The poison had disabled him of speaking; he just stared hard at the man. He was able to mutter a few words. “Ganon . . . . . will not . . . . . . win.” “Heh, is that all you can say?” The man drew a dagger that looked just like he sword, only smaller. He held the blade close to the back of Link’s neck. “There is no one else who can use the Triforce of Courage. Ganon will take over, and I will be paid my sum of one million rupees. This was too easy for me. And I thought you’d be a challenge.” “No . . . . . . “ Link said. “Princess Zelda . . . . . will stop . . . . Ganon. Along . . . . . with . . . . . another one . . . . who will . . . . wield the . . . . Triforce of Courage.” “Princess Zelda? You fool. Princess Zelda is already dead. Just another helpless victim of my blade.” The man said. “No!” Lank rasped as he fell to the ground. As he did, he spoke, but it wasn’t his voice. It was an eerie voice. “Thou thinkest that thou has won, but thou are not ready yet be to smirk. As passes doth time, so will mark the descendants of old, who will be renewed when in its direst hour of Hyrule has been descended upon. Beware the girl of stunning beauty and amazing magic, and beware the boy of many weapons. While doth they may appear weak. The hearts they doth have conquer thine and the evil one’s, their power beyond all compare.” The man was surprised, then brushed the words off. “Whatever you said will make no difference to me.” He raised his dagger. “Goodbye, Hero of Time.” |
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| samus_007 | Mar 8 2006, 04:48 PM Post #2 |
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Oooo... so dark, I like dark fan fics. Keep up the good work. |
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| gamemasterdevil | Mar 8 2006, 05:33 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks, I should have the first chapter up soon. |
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| samus_007 | Mar 8 2006, 05:57 PM Post #4 |
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oh, that is cool. |
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| gamemasterdevil | Mar 8 2006, 07:21 PM Post #5 |
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I got it up sooner than I thought. I guess I'm really creative tonight. Chapter 1 Fear, something that everyone had 14 years after the death of the Hero of Time. Ganon, the evil king, had finally taken over Hyrule. It had been a year since then, and everyone either was a slave, or a runaway. Yumi Ukawata was one of those runaways. She was a Hylian girl at the age of 15. She was very pretty, despite her ragged appearance. She had blonde hair, which was covered with dirt and dust. She had soft blue eyes and a slaves’ robe. The robe was torn in various places, and it was an ugly brownish-gray color. But, the most notable thing on her was the multi-colored jewel that she had around her neck, hanging by a chain. Its colors were red, green, and blue. With her family, she had escaped. They were now running, always running, not stopping. They knew that the slave drivers were coming to catch them, and once they did, every single one of them would die. They had escaped from the Kakiriko Village salve prison. They were now running as fast as they across Hyrule Field, heading for Zora’s Domain. Zora’s Domain, a place that meant freedom. It was the only place that Ganon hadn’t taken over. It was where all the runaway slaves that had survived from escaping were. The slave drivers, two moblins, were catching up. They had their bows out, and open fired. One of them found their mark, and hit Yumi’s father, killing him. Yumi screamed, and tried to run back, but her mother held her, and made her run forward. That was when a dagger came flying through out of nowhere, and hit Yumi’s mother, killing her as well. Yumi stopped, and stared in horror as a Gerudo came out. “You foolish girl,” the Gerudo said. “You actually thought you and your pitiful family could get away?” Yumi’s eyes began to water. “Time to execute you.” The Gerudo took out a scimitar, the curved blade flashing dangerously. Yumi knew that she couldn’t escape a Gerudo, and just awaited death as she knelt on the ground. “Goodbye little girl,” the Gerudo said as she brought down her sword hard. As she did, the jewel that Yumi wore glowed, and a huge gust of wind came out. “W-what is this?!” The Gerudo said in astonishment as she was caught in the gust. The winds crushed her bones. Their power was immense. She died the minute she was caught in there, and when it stopped, she fell, and never got back up. Yumi looked at the Gerudo, then at her jewel. “Did I . . . . do that?” she asked herself. “You sure did missy,” a voice said. Yumi turned to see a young Hylian man in his early twenties. “That was a close one for you. I would’ve dealt with her myself, but you handled it yourself.’ He whistled. “That is one hell of a jewel you got there.” “I got it from my grandmother. She said that it contains a special magic that only the purest of hearts that wield magic can use.” “I’m glad you c’n use it then,” the man said. “My name’s Cain. What’s yours, pretty one?” “I’m Yumi,” Yumi said as she got up. “Are you a runaway?” “Yes, I escaped with my family, but-“ Yumi’s eyes watered, “They killed my mother and father.” Yumi began to cry, deeply saddened by the loss of her remaining family. “Don’t cry,” Cain said as he put a comforting arm on her shoulder. “You’re lucky I came. I’m the leader of Rag.” Yumi slowly calmed down, then looked at Cain. “Rag?” “Runaways against Ganon. Take the first letter of each word, and you have Rag.” Cain said. “I was the first slave to take refuge in Zora’s Domain.” “So, you’ll take me there then?” Yumi asked, hope in her voice, her eyes shining. “Of course I will, pretty miss. I could never refuse a beauty such as yours.” Cain said. “Follow me.” Cain began walking towards Lake Hylia. Yumi followed. Once there, Cain jumped into the water. “Can you hold your breath long?” He asked. “I don’t know. I’ve never been in water before.” “What?! How?” “I was born into slavery,” Yumi said. “Oh, erm, well, sorry I asked.” Cain mumbled. “Get in, and swim down to that little entrance. Yumi jumped in, and dived down, following Cain. She was able to make it too the entrance, and entered it. She instantly swam into a light, and went up. Once she surfaced, she gasped for air. Cain surfaced next to her. “You have a lot of work to do before you become as good divers as the Zoras,” Yumi chuckled and smiled. “Yeah.” “You should smile more often,” Cain said. “Well, I’ll show you too your room. But first, why don’t you meet with the king.” Cain and Yumi got out of the water. Yumi looked around. Kokiris, Gorons, Zoras, and Hylains, all of them were here, and most of them were slaves. She breathed in the clean air. Freedom at last! She followed Cain to the throne room. “Hello Cain, I see you have brought someone.” King Zora said. “Hello king,” Cain said. “This girl escaped recently. Her parents were killed however. Her name is Yumi.” “Welcome, Yumi,” King Zora said. “Please make yourself at home here. We have plenty of rooms still open.” “Thank you,” Yumi said, bowing as she left to explore on her own. “She’s well-mannered,” the king said. “She is. She’ll fit in perfectly!” Cain said. “That’s good.” The king said. “So, any news on the boy?” “You mean Neo? No. That last time we heard of him he was climbing Death Mountain, but that was 2 weeks ago.” “Hmm, then we still can’t ask him to help us.” “Don’t worry king, we’ll have our chance.” “I hope so.” Cain left. The next day, Yumi woke up. She had met a lot of the slaves, and had found a room of her own. “I still need to get out of these clothes,” she said. She saw some clothes on her bed. “These will do just fine!” She said. She had been acting cheerful ever since she came here. Freedom was more than she thought it would be. She took a long shower, then got dressed. Her clothes were pretty plain. A shirt with blue stripes running down the two sides, and blue skirt. Her hair was now a shiny blond. She went outside, and saw that everything was quiet. “Is something wrong?” She asked herself. No one was outside. She saw a few people with weapons, one of them being Cain. She ran over. “Cain, is something wrong?” “Aye Yumi. Something is wrong.” “What?” “Ganon,” A seasoned Hylian male named Kevin said. “He’s sent a few minions to try and get a few of us,” a young Goron male named Kent said. “What kind of minions?” Yumi asked. “We don’t know,” Cain said. “Yumi, I want you too go back to your room, and stay in there.” “But, I want to see-“ “No. This is too dangerous,” Cain said. Yumi sighed. “Alright.” She went back to her room. “Ready? Let’s go!” Cain yelled as his small group of 5 warriors ran out to greet the monster in Hyrule Field. |
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| Uzumaki Naruto | Mar 9 2006, 11:00 AM Post #6 |
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Man..... Yours is better then Mine already!!! |
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| gamemasterdevil | Mar 9 2006, 01:27 PM Post #7 |
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Heh, thanks Creator. |
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| VoltX | Mar 9 2006, 02:10 PM Post #8 |
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Whoa! Very nice, reminds me of a story I had back on Nsider...didn't continue it though. |
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| gamemasterdevil | Mar 9 2006, 02:15 PM Post #9 |
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Thanks Volt. |
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| gamemasterdevil | Mar 9 2006, 03:19 PM Post #10 |
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Teh second chapter is up! Chapter 2 A dragon; one of them most powerful beings, but had a very easy weakness; its head. Cain fell to the ground. “Damn! This thing’s too strong for us!” He yelled. “We can do nothing but try. Sacrificing ourselves if we must,” Kevin said. Kent nodded as he fell back, using a shield as the dragon hurled a fireball at him. “Kevin’s right.” “I know,” Cain nodded. “Let’s get this thing!” They all charged, and the dragon used it’s powerful tail to smash all of them, sending them sprawling to the ground. They were too weak to get up. Yumi walked out, and screamed. Cain saw Yumi. “Yumi! Get back inside!” He yelled. Yumi tried to run, but the dragon’s tail blocked her way. She shivered in fear as the dragon began to charge up a fireball in its mouth. She tried to find a way out, but it was a futile effort. She persisted nonetheless. Then the dragon fired the fireball. She was hit, and sent to the ground. She tried to get up, but she couldn’t. The dragon raised its tail, ready to kill her. Cain tried to get up, but couldn’t. “No!” He yelled. A boy was walking along the pathway to Ganon’s Castle. He was a very strongly built boy. His eyes were bloodshot, and always looked hostile. He had on a red tunic with two brown belts, one around his waist, the other around his right shoulder, and brown boots. He looked to be 15. His hair was dark brown. Strapped across his belts was an assortment of weapons. He continued walking. Two years ago, a dragon had killed his family. He had learned to deal with it, but during those two years, his appearance had changed to what it was now. He was able to talk, but he never sounded happy, and he barely did. He barely smiled. He had closed his heart off to the world, thinking of everyone as worthless. His name was Neo. No one knew his last. He noticed a dragon that looked like it was about to attack something or someone. An uncontrollable rage welled up inside of him, and he dashed as fast as he could towards the dragon, his hands clenching into fists. The dragon brought its tail down at Yumi. Yumi closed her eyes, shaking. The dragon’s tail stopped moving as the dragon was punched by something, and knocked back, tripping and falling. “What the hell? Who did that?” Kevin asked. “I don’t know,” Kent said as he noticed a boy that had just landed. “Hey, look over there! There’s a boy in front of Yumi.” Cain looked at the boy with a strange eye, then stammered as he spoke. “T-t-that’s Neo!” He said. “The one we’ve been looking for?” Kevin asked. “Just look at him! I’ve never seen so many weapons strapped to one person in my life!” Cain said. “How did he knock back that dragon?” Kent asked. “It looks like he punched him.” Kevin said. “That’s incredible,” Cain said. Neo looked backwards, hearing Cain, Kevin, and Kent. They all saw his bloodshot and enraged eyes looking at them. Although he wasn’t looking at them with hostility, they all thought he was, except Cain. “Is he mad at us?” Kevin asked. “His eyes have blood fire in them,” Kent said. “I get the feeling he’s going to attack us.” “No, he always looks like that, except for the blood fire,” Cain said. “He must be in rage.” Yumi was still shaking. When she realized that she wasn’t dead, she opened her eyes, and looked at Neo. “Who are you?” She asked. Neo jumped slightly at Yumi’s voice, and turned around. His bloodshot eyes staring at hers. The blood fire momentarily disappeared, and his eyes appeared to be looking at her calmly. “Stand back,” he said as he turned back around, the hostility and blood fire returning to his eyes as he dashed forward. By this time, the dragon had gotten up. It screeched as it breathed fire at Neo. Neo took out a shield, and blocked the fire with it, but his shield couldn’t handle the fire, and it broke, and Neo was sent to the ground by the ferocity of the shield breaking, and got burned. The dragon proceeded to smash Neo, but Neo rolled over, and took out his megaton hammer. He jumped up, kicking the dragon in the head, sending it slightly upward as he smashed the head dead-on with his megaton hammer, sending into the dragon into the ground. Neo landed, only to be hit by the dragon’s tail. He landed next to Cain, who had finally gotten up. “You okay mate?” Cain asked as he helped Neo up. “Yeah, I’ll be fine,” Neo said. “. . . . . Thanks.” Neo then ran off, switching weapons. He now had a bow and a few ice arrows out. He notched all three of them too his bow, and fired them. All three of them hit, but not before the dragon cut Neo with it’s razor-sharp claws. Once hit, the dragon was frozen. Neo knelt on the ground, trying to cope with the pain. He had been cut almost everywhere, blood pouring from his wounds. He got up slowly, and took out his megaton hammer. With the last ounce of strength he had, he jumped up, and swung the megaton hammer against the frozen dragon. The dragon died as the ice broke into shards. Neo landed in front of Yumi. He knelt on the ground, tired and weak, but still held on to consciousness. Cain, Kevin, and Kent walked over. “Yumi, what the hell were you doing?!” Cain asked. “I was . . . . . worried,” Yumi said as she got up. “So, your name’s Yumi,” Neo said weakly. “Sorry for not introducing myself. My name’s Neo.” Kent looked at Neo. “You’re lucky he came Yumi.” “Yumi smiled half-heartedly. “Yeah,” She said as she walked over to neo, and knelt down beside him. “Thanks for saving me.” “My intention was just to kill the dragon.” Neo said, the blood fire leaving his eyes. “Why would you just want to kill a dragon?” Kevin asked. “My family was killed by a dragon. Now that I’ve killed one, I can finally completely let go of the past,” Neo said. “Well, you saved me nonetheless,” Yumi said. “I’m just adding that as a bonus to slaying the dragon and getting revenge.” Neo said. Yumi hoisted Neo on her right shoulder, and Cain hoisted him on his left. “Right, we’ll take you back to King Zora. He’ll get some healers for you.” “Thanks,” Neo said as he went unconscious. |
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