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| Rez's Story; yea, its here, and still in progress | |
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| Rez_The_Stampede | Mar 2 2006, 09:53 PM Post #1 |
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...Just Rez O.o
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Yea, I finally got my lazy a** into gear, and wrote this, hope you guys like it, and yes, there will be more.. ----------------------------------------- Chapter one: The Start It was a cold and stormy night, the rain falling hard on a small shack made of sticks and tree branches. The cool rain dripped through the leaf coverings, falling into metal buckets, making a clanking sound as each droplet makes contact. The shack was mostly empty, save for a few loaves of bread, and leaf beds. On one such bed was a small figure, alone, with anyone. Two taller figures stood outside, the moonlight shining on their faces. The two looked deep into each other’s eyes, as the taller of the two wiped a tear from the shorter one’s eye. They hugged each other, a final farewell, kissed, sealed the deal, and parted ways. |
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| Rez_The_Stampede | Mar 3 2006, 08:34 AM Post #2 |
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Chapter 2: The Change The figure in the shack let out the cries that any young child would. This one was about 3 months old, yet it looked like it may have five years on its belt. The child tossed and turned, as a few droplets of rain fell on the child’s head. The droplet fell, just above the child’s left eye, and slid down, down his face, falling off of the side, and, as it slid, the skin began to change a bit, but soon changed back to normal as gusts of wind dried the water. The child grew a bit, and the night turned to day, as a cat came into the shack, making its home in a pile of leaves. |
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| Rez_The_Stampede | Mar 3 2006, 08:35 AM Post #3 |
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Chapter 3: Growth The sun came up the next day, and the child was a bit bigger, able to walk, and talk on its own. The child rose with a start, scaring the cat, as it growled, and bolted out the door. The child stood up, and stretched his long tan arms, reaching his small hands to his stomach, scratching it, as letters appear where he scratched. The letters were faded, but he could make out the letters “R” “E’ and “Z’. “R...e….Re….R…e….z….R-e-z…Rez!” The child sounded out the letters, taking this as a symbol of his name, as it was the first words he had seen, or remembered hearing. After saying this, the letters were gone… |
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| Kuro_Tsuwamono | Mar 3 2006, 09:05 AM Post #4 |
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May death do you part....
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Nice story my man. |
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| Rez_The_Stampede | Mar 3 2006, 09:06 AM Post #5 |
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>.> Thank ye Senor Circus |
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| Fures | Mar 3 2006, 12:04 PM Post #6 |
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The coolest person
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Interesting looking forawrd to see what will happen next |
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| Luigi126 | Mar 3 2006, 12:29 PM Post #7 |
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Meanie Boolumple Muffin-Hands
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Hmm...If I had written it, I would have included more explosions, death, and meaningless nudity, but that's just me...and hey, those are always an option in future chapters, right? ![]() But in all seriousness, that was pretty good. I look forward to reading more. |
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| Rez_The_Stampede | Mar 3 2006, 12:31 PM Post #8 |
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>_< ya, im getting there, but thanks by the way |
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| Rez_The_Stampede | Mar 3 2006, 12:47 PM Post #9 |
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Chapter 4: The Hunt Begins Rez walked outside, the air moist with the water that had fallen from the heavens the night before. Rez stepped over a puddle, cautious not to step in the substance that was on the ground, as his tummy rumbled. Rez knew this feeling; this was one of the few things he could remember from earlier days, as he walked around the shack, gathering berries and mint leaves. “Food” The child stated, as he crammed a few berries in his mouth, and began to chew them happily. A cool gust of wind blew, as Rez shivered, and realized he needed to find something to keep him warm. Just as he realized this, a few deer walked past him, and he looked closely at the fur. It looked warm enough, but he was not quite sure how to get it from the deer. |
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| Deleted User | Mar 3 2006, 01:42 PM Post #10 |
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This is interesting, but confusing as heck... |
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