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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 23 2006, 05:58 PM (740 Views) | |
| gamemasterdevil | Feb 23 2006, 05:58 PM Post #1 |
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There are still a few rough edges to be smoothed out, but I'll do that later. I just wanted to get this up. Prologue: “Then you shall give this tree a new name.” Martel said. “What?” Lloyd said. “Me, give it a new name?” “Yes. With the revival of this tree, and the new protector it has, it must be given a new name.” “Lloyd, give it a name for everyone.” Colette said. “So, this is the tree that keeps the two worlds together,” Lloyd said, looking at the tree with a thoughtful glance. “Alright, I’ve got it! This tree’s name is gonna be the Aselia Tree!” . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18 years have passed since the naming of the Aselia Tree. Lloyd and Colette were wed, and had a daughter. They stayed in Iselia, where they now live happily. Kratos, after 18 years of staying in Derris-Kharlan, has finally sighted Earth. Derris-Kharlan comes closer every passing second. Zelos returned to Meltokio, where he is to this day, still flirting with girls. Sheena moved, with the help of Lloyd and Colette, all the people of Mizuho too Iselia, and her along with them. Genis and Raine stayed in Iselia as well. Regal returned to Altimira, where he now resides. Presea returned to Ozette, which was rebuilt, along with all the other cities that were destroyed. A golden age of peace befell the combined world, and discrimination has finally ended, although in a few places it’s still there . . . . . . . . . . . . . . But, peace is never eternal. |
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| samus_007 | Feb 25 2006, 05:44 PM Post #2 |
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that is a good start, you left it so people will wonder what will happen next but you give us plenty of information. Very good. |
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| Uzumaki Naruto | Feb 27 2006, 12:49 PM Post #3 |
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Great Job GMD, But for some truth here is Some info, The Trees new name isn't Aselia Tree, But the trees Real name is Ysggdrasill, If you Don't know or belive me play Tales of Phytrinsa " Wrong spelling", But good. Job Nice Start |
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| gamemasterdevil | Feb 28 2006, 09:36 PM Post #4 |
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Thanks both of you. And creator, I meant for it to be named the Aselia Tree. I know it's called the Ysggdrasill, but I wanted it to be named after the combined world's name for the RP. |
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| gamemasterdevil | Feb 28 2006, 09:42 PM Post #5 |
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Chapter 1: A young man, at the age of 18, trekked across the Triet Desert. He wore a red tunic, with a black belt and brown boots. His body was very muscular, and he wielded two swords. His eyes were a strange orange and his hair was brown. His name was Seth Yakasaki. His strength was superhuman, but he usually never used his full strength. He always used what a normal human had. He put a hand over his eyes, blocking the sun’s light. It was unusually hot, even for the Triet Desert. Seth took a bottle of water out of his travelers’ pack, and drank some, then put it back. “Damn, it’s hot out.” he said as he adjusted his two sword scabbards. Suddenly, the ground began to shake. “What the?” Seth said as he planted his feet firmly into the ground, but the sand was too uneven, and he fell, seeing a giant worm emerge from the ground. “What the hell is that thing?! I thought monsters were long gone . . . . . wait a minute.” Seth got up. He noticed the worm was a dark purple, very much unlike regular worm monsters. It had dark powder foaming from its mouth. Seth drew his swords. They too were a dark purple, and these two swords had a dark aura around it. They were called Nebilim. “Time to take that thing down before it gets close to Triet!” Seth dashed forward towards the worm, which had now just noticed him. It went underground, and came back up swiftly, biting him in the arm. “Damn!” Seth said, dropping one of his swords as he grabbed his arm. It strangely wasn’t bleeding, just a sense of immense pain. Ignoring the pain, Seth grabbed his dropped sword, and slashed with one while thrusting with the other at the worm. He landed both attacks, and purplish blood came spewing out of the wounds. “What the hell is that?! Purple blood?” The worm roared as it reared up, and threw itself at Seth. Seth was ready this time. He dropped his swords, and put his hands out in front of him. The dust impaired his vision, but the colossal monster was easy to see. The worm touched his hands, and Seth caught it, almost falling over as he curled the worm into a ball, and then lifted it with his left hand, grinning as he took his right hand, grabbed a sword, and then thrust it into the creature. It roared as purple blood spilled over Seth. “Ugh, just what I needed before visiting Yumisato. A bath.” He took the sword out, and then dropped his sword as he clenched his right hand into a fist. “Drown in the ocean!” he yelled as he jumped up, using his odd strength to propel himself and the worm into the air, and then, aiming at the ocean, punched it as hard as he could. The worm was sent into the ocean, creating waves that reached the clouds due to the impact . . . . . . . Onlookers from around Slyverant watched as waves reached the sky, confusion inside all of them. What could have possibly caused such an impact? Lloyd, Sheena, Genis, Raine, and Colette were looking at the waves. “What could have caused that?” Lloyd asked as he saw the waves receding back into the ocean. “I don’t know. Only an extreme gravitational pull or a sudden impact of colossal weight could have created that.” Raine said. “It could have been Derris-Kharlan.” Genis said, pointing at the sky, where a small purple dot could be seen. “No, that’s not it,” Raine said. “Derris-Kharlan is too far away.” “Wait . . . . . Derris-Kharlan is coming back?” Sheena asked. “I thought it drifted away.” “That may be true, but it can still come back as it drifts through space.” Raine said. Lloyd took out the Eternal Sword. “Maybe Kratos can tell us something.” He said as he raised the Eternal Sword. “Mm?” Kratos could feel a pull from Aselia. “Lloyd . . . . . something must be amiss.” Kratos could feel the Eternal Sword’s pull, and used a teleporter to teleport next to the small group near using the Eternal Sword’s pull. “Is something wrong?” Kratos asked. Genis and Raine quickly explained what happened. “I see . . . . . I have no idea what could have caused this. Maybe some investigation is required.” “Yeah.” Sheena said. “Oh, I know! Why don’t we send Martel.” Colette suggested. “Are you sure you want to send your own daughter?” Raine asked. “She can handle herself. She’s very good with a chakram, and although she doesn’t have super-human strength like Colette, she still has wings. And besides, she needs an adventure anyway!” Lloyd said, “I guess I’ll accompany her,” Kratos said. “That’s fine,” Lloyd said. “She needs to spend time with you anyway.” Kratos was silent for a moment. “I’d like to leave now. The sooner we find out what caused that, the better chance we have of knowing who did it and why. This could be a sign for something.” The others nodded. “Right,” Colette said. “So, where is she?” Kratos said. “Um . . . . . . . . . . .” Colette replied. “You don’t know where she is?” Kratos asked. “We last saw her walking with a few other girls and guys around her age.” Lloyd said. “Maybe they went off to the Iselia Forest.” “Let’s go check,” Colette said. “Alright.” Raine said as she, Genis, Sheena, Lloyd, Kratos, and Colette began walking to Iselia Forest. Upon entering, Lloyd called out. “Martel? Martel! Where are you?” “Dad?” A voice that could calm even the most troubled souls was heard. “Martel!” Lloyd said. “Come over here! Your grandfather is here!” “Alright, hold on!” Martel yelled back at them. Lloyd sighed. “This’ll be awhile.” “You know she likes that one boy Lloyd, get used too it.” Raine said. “I would if she came when we needed her.” “That’s what I meant, get used to waiting.” “Yeah, yeah.” After 10 minutes, Martel had still not come. “Is she ever going to arrive?” Kratos asked. “Hopefully,” Genis said. “Alright, I’m here.” Martel’s voice could be heard from above as she landed, and put her wings away. She wasn’t just pretty, she was stunningly beautiful. Her smile could ease anyone, and make them happy, no matter how horrible they felt. She was wearing clothes similar to Colette’s. Her hair was also like Colette’s, long and blond. She held two chakrams; both of them silver with a coin floating in the middle of each one. She had turquoise eyes. Her wings, when seen, where rainbow colored. She looked at Kratos. “I’m so glad I finally get to meet you grandpa!” she said, smiling. “It is nice to meet you as well.” Kratos said. “So, is that the only reason you guys called me?” Martel asked, turning to Lloyd. “Nope. Martel, you saw that huge wave, didn’t you?” Lloyd asked. “Yeah. At first I was scared, but Rick said it had something to do with love.” Raine sighed. “Boys and their ways of capturing a girl’s heart.” She said. “That’s not true.” “I figured that much,” Martel said. “Anyway, Lloyd and Colette would like you to go with Kratos toward the source of that wave, which, from what I saw, was from the Triet Desert.” Raine said. “You mean I get to travel!” Martel said excitedly. “Yes,” Lloyd said. “Oh, thank you daddy, and thanks mom!” Martel said, hugging Lloyd tightly, then hugging Colette tightly. “Your welcome,” Colette said. “We figured you needed an adventure, and now you get to spend time with Kratos.” “We should be going. I have a few travelers’ materials with me.” After goodbyes, Martel and Kratos began walking south, towards the Triet Desert. “So, how far to the Triet Desert?” Martel asked. “About 1 day by foot, and 2 hours by air.” Kratos said. “Okay,” Martel put her chakrams away. “Mom and Dad said that there used to be monsters around. Are there still monsters?” “Not likely,” Kratos said. “That’s good,” Martel said. Lloyd looked at the sad faces of almost every single teenage boy in Iselia as they watched Martel go. “Heh, looks like these guys are gonna have to find someone else to admire now.” . . . . . . . “Dammit,” Seth said as he washed off in an oasis in Triet. “Damned worm with purple blood. There was definitely something wrong with that worm. One: It’s a monster, the first one I’ve seen in awhile, and two: It had purple stuff foaming outta its mouth, and it was just acting very more hostile than a regular giant worm.” “Calm down Seth.” Seth’s cousin, Yumisato, said. Yumisato looked like a healer. He wore the clothes of a priest, and had blue eyes and black hair. His hair could be seen from the priest cap he wore. “Oh shut up,” Seth said. “You’re not the one who fought it.” “So?” “So, you can’t tell me to calm down when I’ve just tired myself out battling this fricken’ giant worm.” “Yes I can, you caused that giant wave, didn’t you?” “No, I didn’t. I just put the worm on the ground. Thanks for stating the obvious.” Seth said sarcastically. He was clearly in a bad mood. He dried himself off. “Look, don’t take it out on me,” Yumisato said. “It’s not my fault a monster came. I’m very curious as to how a monster appeared so suddenly.” “So am I,” Seth said as they walked back to the inn in Triet. It was late, and he needed some rest. “Night Sato.” “Night Seth.” As dawn arose, Kratos knew someone was approaching him. The person was clearly inexperienced in stealth-ness, as he was making many noises. Once he reached Martel, who was still sleeping, he drew his sword, and the point came right to the person’s neck. “Don’t move, or you will perish right here.” He said in a not-so-friendly tone. The person, a young boy at the age of 18, froze, then spoke, stammering. “P-p-p-please d-d-d-don’t k-k-k-kill m-m-me.” “Then step back slowly, and give me your name.” The boy stepped back. “M-m-my name is Rick.” “Hmm, you were the one that Raine and Martel mentioned. Quickly, state your business here.” Kratos said. “I c-c-came here to go with you guys.” “You just want to be with Martel.” Kratos said. “N-n-no,” Rick replied. “I want to g-go on an adventure too.” “Don’t lie.” Kratos said. “I can’t stand liars.” “I really do want to go on an adventure, but Martel was one of the reasons I came as well.” Rick said, knowing that Kratos wouldn’t hurt him now. Kratos sheathed his sword. “I see. Well, I personally don’t want you with. But, if my granddaughter wishes it, I guess I can endure you.” Rick was silent for a few moments, then heard Martel as she woke up. Martel yawned, and looked at Kratos. “Morning grandpa.” “Good morning,” Kratos replied. “Someone by the name of Rick is here to see you.” Martel turned around, and saw Rick. “Rick! What are you doing here?!” “I, uh, came to accompany you guys.” Rick said. “You wanted to go on an adventure too?” Martel asked. “Yeah.” Rick replied. Martel turned to Kratos. “Can he come with us?” “If you really want him too come.” Kratos replied as he began packing up the supplies. “Well, since you’re here Rick, you’ll be carrying the supplies now.” “Wha-?” Rick’s sentence was disrupted as Kratos placed the supply bags in his arms. “I’m too old for this.” “Wait! You don’t even look old!” Rick said. “Looks can be deceiving,” Kratos said. “It’s either you carry the supplies, or my sword at your throat.” “Grandpa!” Martel said. “I’m sorry Martel, but if he wishes to join us, he must do something. The only reason I’m making him do it is because I see no weapon.” “You need a weapon? Here.” Rick pulled out a bag he was carrying a beautifully crafted sword. “Here’s your weapon.” “You should equip the sheath,” Kratos said, taking the supply bags. “Anyway, we should get going. Triet is not far off.” Martel and Rick nodded as the three began walking towards Triet, just entering the Triet Desert. |
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| Linkmaster_21 | Mar 1 2006, 06:28 PM Post #6 |
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@_@ Man that's long. and without changing paragraphs everytime some one talks it's very hard to read. |
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| gamemasterdevil | Mar 1 2006, 07:23 PM Post #7 |
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Every time? It'd be even longer, as most of my text is dialogue. I can edit it for you if you want though. Maybe it'll be easier for others to read as well . . . . Unfortunately, I have no clue how to tab the paragraphs on this forum. |
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| Linkmaster_21 | Mar 1 2006, 07:24 PM Post #8 |
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just put who said what after they talk, some times you didn't do that. It got confusing. >_> |
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| gamemasterdevil | Mar 1 2006, 07:27 PM Post #9 |
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That makes it very repetitive though. Hmm, It's easy for me to read, and I've read books where the author sometimes doesn't specify who's talking after they speak. They just speak after an action or soemthin'. Oh well, I guess it's just easy for me. |
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| Linkmaster_21 | Mar 1 2006, 07:31 PM Post #10 |
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yeah I have too but it was only between two people and it was: "blah, blah" "blah" and so on. XD |
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