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please read and tell me what i need to improve; charicter
Topic Started: Jun 22 2008, 09:47 PM (160 Views)
cory1992
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Name: hano gouto
State Name: N/A
Alias/Nickname:the dambed

Age:24
Gender:male
Race: Homunculi
Nationality: unknow

Height: 5, 4
Weight:145
Eye color:green
Hair color:black
Hair Style:cut short in a devil lock over the left eye
Clothing:a black dress suit with blick rimed hat. Dress shoes and gloves and i white undershirt
Overall Pic:N/A

(PETS ARE OPTIONAL)
Pet Breed:tarancula
Pet gender:male
Pet name:rubert

Personality: Hono is a calm understanding man, allways willing to listed to some one in need. But if pushed far enough he will snap into a angry hatefull screaming lunitick. Thoe he is shy he will try to make frends to keep his true self hidden and live a normal life.

Likes: The stairs, reading, food, flowers, powems.

Dislikes:cocky self centerd pigs that cant see past there own nose and see there
dimise.

Dark Secret:he has another personalaty

Idol:N/A

Closest Friend:N/A

Rival:N/A

Skills: the abilaty to tranfer any amount of muscle mass to any where in his body to increase that parts capabilatys. The abilaty to shut off his nerve endings. He is well trained in panzer kunst(tell me it thats not fair, i dont want to be cheeting or anything)

Weapons:Fist, feet, and i thin blade.

Transportation:feet

Family: mother-died
Father-dead
Brother-dead
sister-dead

History: One night a man and woman found a small child on there doorstp in a basket. With this child was a note explainging his name was Hono, and to please kiip him safe for he is a speshal boy. The man and woman, who were unable to have childran, gladly acsepted there new found gift. So from that day forword he was known as Hono Guto. He grew up in a small vilage in a mountain vally with many other children and led a good child hood. All good things come to an end though, for one day there was a terable acsodent when a cart fell on his father. Wanting to help he ran to him and lifted with all his might, but the cart would not move. Then out of no where he lifted the cart and pushed it off his father.
Years past, years of torment and suffering. Ever scence the day he saved his father, the day that he did the imposoble for his age. The children and elders of the vilege knew that there was something wron with the chiled and wanted to know what, but they went about it the wrong way. They tryed to beat it out of him, they stoned him, hit him, and emetioinaly distroyed him. That all stoped on his 15th birth day. The children had gone to far that day, they had taken his work from school and had tossed it into the river. Hono went crazy and started to atack the boys, savagly and brutaly beeteing them with unbelevable strankth. Needless to say he was wanted for the attack on the children.
But his parents rifused and fot that, for hiding the one they loved, they were killed. So Hono cryed, and ran, he ran as fast as he could out of the mountans. One night when he was serching for his next meal in the woods he met a man. "i have see what you have done in the vilage" the man said. Hono just looked away and began to cry for he missed his family and his friends. I can help you saied the man, i know what you are fallow me and you will one day know to. So he went with the man, and for years he traind his skills and found out that he wasnt human, but a Homunculi. When the day came he set out into the world to live a normal life and hlep thouse who needed it. All the time knowing that there was another side in him wating to kill.

RP Sample: "what will it be ser" said the young wateress. "Ill just take a water please" said Hono in his low raspy voice. Hono wasnt here to eat really, he was watching the men across the room. "They have been sitting in the same spot for an hour now....what are they doing." One man looked at Hono and staired, looking at his frends soon after he pointed hono out in the croud.Please dont let this be a fight he thought as the men rose from there table and walked towrds him. Well a fight was what Hono was gonna get.
"you got a problem boy" sayed a larg burrly man. "NO ser non at all" he said grining. "I think you do boy" the man said leaning closer on the table. "Ser the only problem i have is your breath....no offence". "WHAT" scremmed the man flipping the table in honos derection. Hono sighed, with out getting up he punced the oncoming tabe snaping it in two. "Well and you a freak" mocked the man. Hono stood, a new look in his eyes, the look of hatred. The man ran at hono, Hono thinking quickly put 30% of his left arms muscle into his right leg and thrusted out hitting the man in the chest. Then once agen he ran, as far away as he could, befor the beast in hin could serface.
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