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Raul; NOT FINISHED
Topic Started: Feb 22 2008, 07:57 PM (181 Views)
Raul
Novice
Name:Raul
State Name:N/A
Alias/Nickname:N/A

Age:13
Gender:Male
Race:Human/Alchemist
Nationality:N/A

Height:Same as Edward before the movie XP
Weight:95 pounds
Eye color:Red
Hair color:Red
Hair Style:spiked in front
Clothing:A red tee-shirt with an alchemy symble on it
he has reddish shorts
an auto mail arm(fast and strong yet breaks easyly and can't use it to it's best potental)
Finger less gloves (no symble)
pic:N/A

Pet Breed:N/A
Pet gender:------
Pet name:-----

Personality:Stubborn, kind, fun loveing
Likes:Food!!!
Dislikes: Being ignored by others

Skills:Alchemy with only a clap(has seen the gate), moves at high speeds(auto mail arm is very light),others later on
Weapons:his auto mail arm can be turned in to what evr he wants
Transportation:foot

Family:Unknown
History:as a baby he was one day found in centeral city. It is, right at the moment, unknown weather his parents are alive or not. He ws found and cared for by an old lady until the age of ten where he ran away. He has travel the world for 3 year which has made him strong and fast and while travel got his arm cut off and replaced with auto mail. his dream is to become a state alchemist this year.

How he saw the gate and lost an arm:
on the 2nd year of traveling around the world he found him self in some sort of forest. then he saw some sort of figger.
"wait who are you" said Raul as he went chasing after the thing. When he nearly caught up to the thing something weird happened and all time seemed to stop.
"can't move whats happening.......".

Just then the thing turned around and rushed toward Raul. It grabed him and started pulling.
"what, what are you doing?"
"hehehahaha".
RIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP.the thing ripes off Rauls arm and then disapperes.

"I'm going to die and i'm only twelve I'm Going TO DIE". Raul then faints.
while dreaming he comes across a gate... then he wakes up in a near by hospital with an auto mail arm.
Nurse: "ah your awake we found you out in the forest and you gave us quite a scare, but thankfully your okey stay in here and don;t move for the next cople weeks"
Then nurse then leaves.
"sorry but i can't stay here that long". Raul Jumps out the window and lands scaring up his leg and he runs off.
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Raul
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Fayt Leingod
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1. You can't use the gate by dying.

2. It takes years to learn to use auto-mail.

3. It takes an auto-mail genius (NOT KIN) to make a very light auto-mail with no side-effects, like fragile or small or something.

4. Use better words, make your history and RP sample.....colorful, so to speak.

5. Give more background. More information. I NEED THE INFORMATION!!!!!
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Raul
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1. isn't that how al saw it in the manga?
2. he's had it for a year
3. done
4. I'm VERY LAZY
5. Like what?
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Alex
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1. Al never saw the gate, note why he uses a circle for transmutation

2. a year is not long enough to master it, look at Edward he is older then you and had it longer but he can't use it like a master

4. too bad get unlazy!

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Fayt Leingod
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1. Actully, he did see the gate, but he also did human transmutation.

2. What Alex said.

5. Why did he run away? How did the hospital find him? What was the thing in the woods? How did traveling the world make him strong and fast? think about it.
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Raul
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1. okey i find a way
2.fixed
4-5. it might take a while *gets dizey at all the demands*
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Alex
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Also please note you cannot turn your automail into whatever you want, since its light its probably less dense so you can't create a huge giant blade out of your arm because it will shatter if a pebble would touch it.
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