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Atem Itsuki
Topic Started: Jan 27 2008, 03:04 PM (333 Views)
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Name: Atem Haspeht Lucy Itsuki
State Name: (You must take the test first)(would prefer The Egyptian Alchemist)
Alias/Nickname: Atem
Rank: Major Atem Haspeht Lucy Itsuke

Age: 31
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Nationality: The Great Desert

Height: 5’6”
Weight: 145 Lbs
Eye color: Dark Brown
Hair color: Dark Brown
Hair Style: Tied back in a bun, similar to Riza Hawkeye’s hair without the bangs
Clothing: When not in military uniform, Atem wears a black, ribbed turtleneck, a pair of black jeans with a double studded pyramid belt, and a pair of ankle high tie up boots, black.
Overall Pic: http://furparoatem.deviantart.com/art/Descent-56910486 Not color, sorry.
http://s54.photobucket.com/albums/g120/Par...974766_ORIG.jpg Cosplay of Character


Pet Breed: Hamster
Pet gender: Male
Pet name: Dante

Personality: Atem is quick to anger. There are times when she will snap for no reason. It’s been said that she’s bipolar, but they’ve yet to prove it. Behind her anger and tough façade, she’s truly a compassionate person. The only problem is that she never lets anyone get that close. She’s more closed off and straight to business.
Likes: She loves cats, the opportunity to fight, and a stroll in the woods.
Dislikes: Butterflies and disobedient inferiors.

Skills: Normal alchemy and a special brand of black magic called Shadow Alchemy.

Shadow Alchemy: Light comes through in waves. By manipulating these waves and changing things such as the amplitude and frequency, it's possible to change the color, mostly to black. At least that's how Atem explains it. In actuallity, Atem studied black magic for a number of years and befriended the shadows. If they are around, it only takes a snap of her fingers to move them.

Weapons: She carries a large metal ankh in her pocket which she will often transmute into various weapons.
Transportation: It’s on foot or anything she can find.
Family: Mother: Selena Itsuki, Deceased. Brothers: Kaname and Amou Itsuki, 36 and 34, respectively. Father: Naoya Itsuki, 68.

History: Atem was only 6 years old when she witnessed her mother murdered. Mortified, she ran back to her brothers, crying and covered in blood. When she led them back to her mother’s body, they immediately thought she had killed her and intended to kill their young sister. Atem managed to escape, but was now forced to run for the remainder of her childhood. She spent her days in the library and eventually learned how to get her own food. It was science by day, but black magic by night. She happened to tip over a book on alchemy when reaching for an astrology book, and quickly took to learning the science. If she wasn’t reading, she was fending off her brothers, which struck monthly. The black magic she had learned was invaluable, and often hurt them enough that they had to wait a month before trying to best her again.

(Gate): Atem, now 13 and working in the same library where she slept, looked from the books to the painted circle on the ground. Although she had read that this was taboo, she couldn’t bear not having her mother around. The day before, she went out to the local market and picked up all the ingredients. She triple checked the circle, pacing around it. She couldn’t figure out how to replace a soul, but being a scientific student she didn’t really believe in it. After taking a deep breath, she slammed her hands on the circle. She smiled as her mother’s face appeared before her. With that, she lost her concentration and in the minute, Atem lay coughing up blood on the library floor. She was discovered the next morning and rushed to the hospital.

When Atem was 18, she read a flyer for the military in Amestris. In an instant, she knew that was where she needed to go. It wasn’t going to be easy, leaving the only home she had ever known. Yet at the same time, she wanted to leave and go somewhere where she could be properly trained. She was tired of this place; the books were old and she couldn’t take the desert anymore. Better yet, she’d be escaping her brothers almost indefinitely. She packed the various clothes she had gathered; along with the books the library had given her, and got on a plane to meet her destiny.

RP sample: Atem stared down at the little hamster that was hiding between The Iliad and Dante’s Inferno. “What are you doing down here, little hamster” she whispered to it, a smile spreading across her lips. She always had a soft spot for animals. “Come here, you little rodent.” She quickly scooped up the hamster and stared into its fire red eyes. “I think I’ll call you Dante. Normally, they’d make me throw you on the streets, but if you can keep quiet, I’ll keep you in the black magic section. Only I go in there.” Atem laughed a bit, suddenly realizing how stupid she was for talking to a hamster. But little Dante seemed to understand and crawled from her hand to her shoulder.

She scowled, looking down at the tipped over bookshelves. “Are you kidding me!? I just rearranged these yesterday and some brat knocks them over! I suppose I should be grateful I even have a job, but da-” She stopped herself as she saw a small kid, no more than 4, begin to cry. “Oh come on…look kid, get out of my way or so help me, this book case won’t be the only thing on the ground!” She glared as the child ran, then turning back to the books. “God I hate kids…” As she rummaged through the books, looking for the next number, she picked up one of her favorite books from her childhood. Memories flooded back to her. She shut her eyes tight and yelled, pushing them back into the recesses of her mind. What she failed to notice was that the book had been sent flying through the office window and into the head of her boss. “…Crap.”


Thanks so much for at least looking at this, I've had the character for 5 years with this story so I'm a bit attached to it, sorry about the parents murdered but I've got my reasons XD
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First off here is what you need to fix

Race: Human/Pheonix
Nationality: Egyptian

Those two, race and nationality. Its impossiable to be Human/Pheonix. If you want that then you need to be a Chimera. And i'm pretty sure Chimera aren't allowed to join the military. Secondly we aren't on our Earth, there is no such thing as Egypt, thats on the other side of the gate, if you need to konw what countries/cities we have go to the main page and scroll down to check the forums.

Also please explain Shadow Alchemy, i'm a huge FMA fan and never heard anything about Shadow Alchemy so you will need to eplain that as scientifically as possible (doesn't have to be a ton of detail, just enough to make it have sense because Alchemy is a sicence) we'll look over it again after you change that. Everything else looks good

EDIT: Last thing, if you do decide to make her human and in the military please follow this link and pick one of the ranks (not fhurer)
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Race: Human
Nationality: The Great Desert

Here's an explaination but if it's unacceptable I guess I'll just have to be a plain human with no abilities other than alchemy. Not that that's bad. ^^=

Light comes through in waves. By manipulating these waves and changing things such as the amplitude and frequency, it's possible to change the color, mostly to black. At least that's how Atem explains it. In actuallity, Atem studied black magic for a number of years and befriended the shadows. If they are around, it only takes a snap of her fingers to move them.


You know, we could probably just drop this. I've always had trouble getting this cleared on forums. Only issue is that other than alchemy I don't know what else Atem could do. One option is strength through military training but I don't even know if I'll be accepted into the military. So I'm pretty much just a random alchemist with no real defining traits XD

Thank you for your comments, I suck at this.

Wait we can pick a rank? I thought we were assigned one. I'd like to enter as Major and work my way up, the way FMA did it.
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ok i'll add your rank and yes that explanation is acceptable, in other words she manipulates the frequenecy to turn them the color black. also just to let you know you can't do much damage with that unless you heat up the light waves to make them really hot then you could do damage. also just so you know next time check your first post and near the top right should be some options one of them is to edit. instead of posting again, for for future reference.

EDIT: Also i'm not sure what the specifics on Black Magic is, in FMA world Alchemy is a science and there really is no black or white magic. so you could say he pratices it but he can't do much with it like cast spells or conjure demons

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